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Who was Rani Gaidinliu? Present a brief account of Zeliangrong movement. 10 marks

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Parth Verma

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  • In introduction,you have to briefly present facts about Rani Gaidinliu.
  • In the body the answer must discuss the significance of the contributions of Rani Gaidinliu and Zeliangrong movement with its features. 
  • You have to conclude by reasserting the significance of such leaders in the history of Indian freedom struggle.

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9 responses to “Who was Rani Gaidinliu? Present a brief account of Zeliangrong movement. 10 marks”

  1. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
    Dakshina Moorthy

    Please review the answer.

    1. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
      Dakshina Moorthy

      @parth-verma1 please review.

    2. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Dakshina
      Good introduction.
      Good use of flow chart.
      Briefly explain the background of the Zelaingrong movement.
      Use proper subheadings like background,causes ,aftermath etc.. to get better marks.
      Good points but need to diversify your content,for example you can write slogan of her .
      Conclusion is good.
      Keep writing,you will succeed.

  2. NJ_00 Avatar
    NJ_00

    MOJO0206200D40884686

    1. NJ_00 Avatar
      NJ_00

      @parth-verma1: Sir please review 4 answers

    2. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Done!

    3. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Lackluster introduction,it should be catchy.
      You did not mention the background and the course of the movement.
      There is lack of content in your answer.
      Read comprehensively to enrich and diversify your content
      Mention her slogan,her title etc..
      Language should be error free,work on basic grammar and spellings.
      Work hard ,you will improve.

  3. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Please review.

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Deepika
      Good introduction.
      Before mentioning the contribution of the movement,write some background and the causes of the movement.
      Write complete answer.
      Read mentor’s comment before writing,it will help you.
      Conclusion is good.
      Keep writing,work hard!

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