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- In the introduction, briefly describe what do you mean by impartiality.
- In the body, describe in detail the importance of impartiality for civil services.
- Conclude by highlighting its importance.
What do you understand by impartiality? Why is it regarded as cardinal value of civil services? 10 marks
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11 responses to “What do you understand by impartiality? Why is it regarded as cardinal value of civil services? 10 marks”
tiwarisamiksha6@gmail.com
Hi Samiksha
You have given the introduction too long, just define impartiality in one paragraph then write its role in civil services.
Do not write its significance in general. the question is specifically its role in civil services. You can write points like-
-To uphold constitutional values.
-To establish rule of law.
-Build public confidence and trust for the government.
Write according to the demand of the question.
Keep working hard.
divyaloyola13@gmail.com
Hi Divya
Try not to do copy pasting, write in your language.
Good introduction.
Content is good.
Structure is also decent.
Good conclusion.
Work hard and build your own content.
Keep writing.
Devraj
Hi Dev
Lackluster introduction.
First define impartiality . you can write that impartiality refers to equal interest and equal lack of interest without hatred or passion. For a public servant, it means that decisions should be based on objective criteria, rather than on the basis of bias, prejudice or personal interest.
Then write its role in civil services.
Follow a proper structure to fetch better marks.
Along with your points, you can write points like-
-To uphold constitutional values.
-To establish rule of law.
-Build public confidence and trust for the government.
Good conclusion.
Work on presentation.
Keep writing !
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Hi Sachin
Write your introduction in one paragraph only.
Your answer is looking monotonous, give proper headings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
You have written only two points, add more. You can write points like-
-To uphold constitutional values.
-To establish rule of law.
-Build public confidence and trust for the government.
Good conclusion.
Underline keywords and work on handwriting.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Arun
Good introduction.
You have discussed its importance in a decent manner but try not to write only bullet points, substantiate each of them in one or two lines.
You can write under subheadings also for better structure.
Work on concluding remarks, you can write that without impartiality, first the law and justice system will break, then the whole governance system will get inclined towards any one section of the community.
Avoid grammatical errors and work on handwriting.
Work hard, you will improve.
Please review
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