Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction briefly discuss what do you understand by Communalism.
- In the body discuss the reasons contributing to Communalism; Vested political interests, Rise of communal
organisations, Politicization of local problems, Religious fundamentalism etc. Discuss the impact of communalism on Indian society; impact on social fabric, economy, polity etc.
Suggest way forward for eradicating communalism. - Conclude that public awareness needs to be raised about the harmful impact of communalism.
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24 responses to “What do you understand by communalism? Deliberate upon the causes and impact of communalism on Indian society. 10 marks”
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Hi Parakh
Need to rephrase your introduction.
Content is good but you can present it in a better way.
Like a legacy of the past, communalisation of politics etc.
Use of flow chart is appreciable,it saves you time as well as space.
There is a need to add points in way forward, you can write poverty alleviation,providing more employment,reducing educational and economic backwardness in minorities,political communism should be avoided, control on social media etc.
Think broader.
Rest of the content is good.
Work on handwriting.
Keep writing,you will improve!
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Hi Taran
Rewrite your introduction, grammatical errors are there.
Give proper heading like causes of communalism.
Do not write in probability like it can originate.
Need to work upon content.
Add points in causes under subheadings like historical,social.political etc.
And then in impact you can write ghettoization and refugee problem,threat to unity of the nation,communal riots , barrier to development etc.
Brainstorm before writing and think of various perspectives.
Write some way forward and also include the recommendations of Committee on National Integration.
Work on handwriting and presentation.
Work hard !
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Hi Shubham
Good introduction.
Need to write diverse causes to get good marks.
Write political,historical,economic causes also.
You need to work on content.
Try not to write a general answer.
Add points in impact like ghettoization and refugee problem,threat to unity of the nation,communal riots , barrier to development etc.
Suggest some steps to control this communal tendency and then conclude.
Plan the structure before writing,it will help you.
Work on presentation.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Rephrase your introduction.
In causes,write historical and economic causes also.
How rise of middle class leads to increase in communal tendency ? Write only relevant points.
Impact part is good but suggest more steps in way forward. You can also include the recommendations of Committee on National Integration.
Conclusion is good.
Diversify your content.
Work on handwriting and avoid scribbling.
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi NJ
Good introduction but write clashes of 1893 in the impact and consequences part.
You have explained the causes part in a good manner.
Manage your space, write in brief.
Like in this question,there was no space left for way forward so write accordingly.
Always try to mention some way forward to get good marks, for space management you can make a flow chart .
Conclusion is good.
Cover various dimensions to fetch good marks.
Work on handwriting.
Keep writing,you will succeed !
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Hi Dakshina
Rephrase your introduction,refrain from such long sentences.
In the causes ,add points and subheadings like historical,cultural,failure of government.
Work on content.
In the impact part,write that it is barrier for development, reason for terrorism and secessionism . Give example of Khalistan movement.
Try to cover different verticals to get better marks.
You have written quite general points,
In the way forward, write about the behavioural changes, social media should be monitored, write the recommendations of Committee on National Integration.
Work on content.
Improve handwriting.
Keep working hard !
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Hi Unnati
You have uploaded different answers, send again .
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Hi Mehul
Do not write the stages of communalism ,as this is a 10 marker question so be crisp and concise while writing.
You need to work upon content.
In the causes part, write under the subheadings like historical,political, social etc.
Then write the impact of communalism and how it acts as a barrier in development.
Then suggest some way forward.
Always end with some concluding remarks.
Read mentor’s comment before writing the answer,it will help you in writing structured answers.
Work on handwriting, try to write in straight lines.
Need to improve basic grammar and spellings.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Chester
Write about the Britishers under heading causes of communalism,you can give a subheading historical causes. Do not write this in introduction.
Need to add points in the causes part,
Mention communalisation of political parties,poverty in the causes,failure of government etc.
You have written the impacts in a decent manner.
In the way forward , also write about behavioural changes, write the recommendations of Committee on National Integration,political communism should be avoided etc.
Cover more aspects in your answer to get better marks.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing !
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Hi Sneha
Good introduction.
Flow chart is really appreciable.
You have covered diverse aspects in the causes.
Impact is also well explained.
Always try to write the way forward, in this answer you can write that we can eradicate the problem of unemployment among youth, creating awareness in the society about the ill effects of communism through mass media, behavioral changes,social Media should be monitored for violent and repulsive content etc.
Good concluding remarks.
The content is good.
Keep writing,you will succeed!
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Hi Aastha
Good introduction.
In the causes , write about the origin of communism due to colonial past,unemployment,role of social media etc.
you have written 3 points in which 1st and 3rd point are about political parties , so write crisp and concise so that you can add more content in the given word limit.
Impact part is good.
In the way forward,write that social media should be controlled ,identification and mapping of riot prone areas and work on them etc..
Good concluding remarks.
Keep writing,you will succeed !
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