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Virtue is not about practicing morality, the greatest virtue is to be inclusive of all life. Comment.10 marks

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  • In the introduction you have to briefly explain what virtues are. 
  • In the body define “Inclusiveness”. Discuss that virtue is not just about practicing morality; explain this with example. Explain what makes it one of the biggest virtues that are quintessential to humankind. Such questions are best explained with illustrations.
  • You have to conclude by reasserting the significance of inclusivism as an important and significant virtue.

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7 responses to “Virtue is not about practicing morality, the greatest virtue is to be inclusive of all life. Comment.10 marks”

  1. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
    Dakshina Moorthy

    Please review the answer.

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Dakshina read mentor’s comment then write,it will help you to structure your answer in a better way.
      try to write in straight line and work on your handwriting.
      if you are quoting someone like you quoted Dr. APJ kalam, then make sure the content is right.
      Avoid using short forms like &.
      the flow chart of inclusiveness is good
      you need to work hard on content and structure of the question.
      keep writing,you will succeed.

  2. Chester Avatar
    Chester

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    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Chester
      Good introduction.
      You have attempted the question in a good manner.
      Try to write more examples of various personalities like Gandhiji to convince examiner easily.
      Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
      Work on presentation.
      Good conclusion.
      Overall good attempt.

  3. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Please review

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Deepika
      Definition of virtue is good.
      Example of George Floyd shows that you have connected the answer with current affairs,keep it up.
      You have hold over content.
      Well structured answer.
      But need to work on presentation.
      Avoid cutting .
      A decent attempt.
      Persistence is the key to success,keep writing.

  4. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Please review.

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