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There has been a growing demand for pooling of patents of the cure for Covid-19 at the global level. What could be the advantages of such a move? Also explain why such a move has been opposed by some.10 marks

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  • In the introduction, you can mention the urgency of vaccine or medicine for Covid-19.
  • In the body, you can highlight the various advantages of pooling of the patients. First and foremost would be the sharing of knowledge could accelerate the search for a cure. The could be the cost. You can also highlight the issue of vaccine nationalism among some countries and its impact.
  • Conclude by stressing the importance of such move to highlight the equality of life of all.

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12 responses to “There has been a growing demand for pooling of patents of the cure for Covid-19 at the global level. What could be the advantages of such a move? Also explain why such a move has been opposed by some.10 marks”

  1. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Please review.

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      lackluster introduction
      the content is general,you did not mention the issue of vaccine nationalism
      avoid using abbreviations in your answer
      answer is well structured but need to work on diversifying the content
      way forward is missing
      do not get demotivated by marks,keep writing,you will improve

    2. Deepika Saini Avatar
      Deepika Saini

      Do we need to give way forward in each question?

    3. Deepika Saini Avatar
      Deepika Saini

      @parth-verma1 Please clarify.

    4. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Deepika you can give way forward if possible as it adds dimensions to your answer or suggest some steps to be taken in the conclusion.

  2. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
    Dakshina Moorthy

    Please review the answer.

    1. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
      Dakshina Moorthy

      @parth-verma1 please review this answer and other answers too. order no. #0000233081

    2. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Dakshina
      Good introduction
      Good use of flow chart.
      Use headings and subheadings like-Patent Pooling: A boon amidst COVID-19 Pandemic,Role of patent pooling,its advantages ,possibilities of conflicts etc.
      Need to work upon content,add points like advantage of patent pooling is that generic drug manufacturing companies can combine different medications into single/fixed doses to create better medicines.
      Read comprehensively to enrich and diversify your content.
      Good conclusion.
      Keep writing,you will improve!

  3. NJ_00 Avatar
    NJ_00

    MOJO0206200D40884686

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi
      Good introduction.
      Vaccine nationalization is a good point,thumbs up !
      Content is diversified and well placed.
      Well structured answer with proper subheadings.
      Try to write in straight lines and avoid scribbling.
      Good conclusion.
      A decent attempt,keep it up!

  4. Parakh Sarda Avatar
    Parakh Sarda

    Please Review OrderID – ~0000232028

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Parakh
      Need to rephrase your introduction.
      You have discussed the need of patent pooling in a decent manner.
      Good diagram,thumbs up!
      Also mention some way forward or give some suggestions.
      Conclusion is good.
      Avoid grammatical errors.
      Do not use short forms in the answer.
      Overall a decent attempt.
      Keep it up !

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