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The education system like other sectors has been disrupted due to the Covid pandemic. And this has resulted in a push for shifting learning in the classroom to online. Examine the challenges and opportunities involved in the adoption of online mode of education. 10 Marks

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13 responses to “The education system like other sectors has been disrupted due to the Covid pandemic. And this has resulted in a push for shifting learning in the classroom to online. Examine the challenges and opportunities involved in the adoption of online mode of education. 10 Marks”

  1. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
    Dakshina Moorthy

    Please review the answer.

    1. j y o Avatar
      j y o

      do they review through this site or habitat?

    2. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
      Dakshina Moorthy

      This site.

    3. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Dakshina
      Lackluster introduction,it should be catchy.
      Good use of flow chart.
      Use proper headings and subheadings like why there is a need of online learning, what are the issues and challenges etc.
      Structure of answer is not good.
      Also explain briefly how online education cannot be a substitute of traditional learning.
      good conlclusion.
      Work hard on content.
      Keep writing.

  2. Chester Avatar
    Chester

    MOJO0204R00N55952566

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Chester
      There is an need to rephrase your introduction.
      First mention the benefits of online mode.
      You have written the challenges but not measures.
      Write some way forward.
      Also explain briefly how online education cannot be a substitute of traditional learning.
      Work on content.
      Read mentor’s comment before writing,it will help you.
      Brainstorm before writing.
      Underline keywords .
      Work hard,you will improve.

  3. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Please review.

    1. Deepika Saini Avatar
      Deepika Saini

      Payment ID #0000230867

    2. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Deepika
      Good introduction.
      You have adhere to the demand of the question,keep it up.
      Try to cover more aspects,like also explain briefly how online education cannot be a substitute of traditional learning.
      Avoid scribbling,write neat and legible
      Well structured answer.
      Content is also diversified.
      Good attempt,keep it up.
      Keep writing!

  4. NJ_00 Avatar
    NJ_00

    MOJO0206200D40884686

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi
      Grammatical errors,rephrase your introduction.
      Before writing the challenges,briefly explain some benefits of online learning .
      Adhere to the proper structure of the answer.
      You have mentioned the opportunities but also mention why it cannot be a alternative to traditional mode of learning.
      Good conclusion.
      Overall good attempt.
      Work on basic grammar and presentation.
      Keep writing!

  5. Parakh Sarda Avatar
    Parakh Sarda

    Please Review OrderID – ~0000232028

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Parakh
      Good introduction.
      Well structured answer
      Content is well diversified
      You have adhere to the demand of the question.
      A decent attempt.
      You have the potential to write good answers.
      You can join our Mains guidance program for betterment and enrichment of your answers.
      Persistence is the key to success,keep writing,you will improve.

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