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In the intro, mention what do yo understand by positive attitude.
In the body, first state the importance of positive attitude at workplace, then mention whether positive attitude alone is sufficient for success. In the second part, mention importance of skills over positive attitude. You can give some examples.
In conclusion, mention that combination of both will prove effective as some skills are required to keep a positive attitude itself.
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Pradipti,
You have good conceptual clarity about the terms.
But the demand of the question is not met. Question demand how positive attitude alone without relevant skills can’t ensure success. Give an example which shows that although one has positive attitude but lacks skills can’t become successful professionally. Then later you can use the example that you have given to show that both positive attitude and skills are important.
Conclusion is good.
Try to meet the demand of the question.
Keep practising.
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