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Sanvi
Write in 2 pages like UPSC papers. You are missing out the key points.
Explain in one line about the 4 different types of vaccines you have mentioned. Also give examples of each type. This is a pretty straightforward question, so write these things as basic things everyone will write.
Also you can make a diagram of working of mRNA vaccine. Your presentation is good but your content is insufficient in this answer.
Keep writing. Keep improving. đ
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Subhashree
This is a pretty straight forward question, you have attempted well, but presentation could be better. Make simple diagrams for mRNA vaccine working , use tables for comparison if possible. Give examples from current vaccines, it is important.
Also, define what is mRNA. Also you have skipped whole virus vaccines and its types such as inactivated vaccine, live attenuated vaccine. Mention about them.
Introduction and conclusion is ok, you need to present better in such questions as everyone will have the content.
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Gauri Shankar,
You have addressed the core demands but presentation can be better, briefly define other vaccine also in one line each, it will give clarity on how mRNA vaccines are different.
Also give examples of different vaccines. Try to make tables for comparison if possible. Mention that mRNA is a novel idea and how it will help in producing spike proteins in the body.
This is a very straight forward question, content will be not an issue for most people so try to present better.
Keep writing.
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Anupam
Good answer, you have used diagrams and examples, that is very good. Write about sub unit vaccines also.
You can make table to show differences if possible.
Also briefly define what is mRNA, mention spike proteins.
You are doing well. Keep writing.
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Kartikey
Good answer, you have written examples that is very good.
You can also draw simple diagrams to show the working of mRNA vaccines and also mention that in case of Covid, spike protein is produced in the body with help of mRNA vaccine.
This is a very straight forward question, content will be not an issue for most people so try to present better.
Keep writing. đ
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Sana
Don’t write so much in introduction, it gets repetitive and lengthens the answer unnecessarily. This is a pretty straight forward question, you have attempted well, but presentation could be better. Make simple diagrams for mRNA vaccine working. Give examples of different types of vaccines.
Also, you can mention some advantages of mRNA vaccine such as safe, highly efficient and are fully synthetic (don’t require a host for growth). In conclusion, you can write statements, no need to write in points.
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Harshaa
You have attempted well, but presentation could be better. Make simple diagrams for mRNA vaccine working step by step. Give examples of different types of vaccines which we see today.
You have written the first part in some detail, that is good. However, working of mRNA vaccine is also an important part of the question, so a diagram will add immense value, also define mRNA and mention about spike proteins in brief.
Keep writing. Read some of the other answers too. đ
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Arpit
Very well -written, good that you drew diagram.
Mention about sub-unit vaccine too (Novovax). Also, you can mention some advantages of mRNA vaccine such as safe, highly efficient and are fully synthetic (donât require a host for growth).
You are doing well. Keep writing đ
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Ankita
You have attempted well, but presentation could be better. Make simple diagrams for mRNA vaccine working step by step. Give examples of some mRNA vaccines.
Also mention inactivated virus vaccine in types of vaccine. Covaxin is based on this principle.
Explanation of mRNA vaccines is good. You can mention some of its advantages such as safe, highly efficient and fully synthetic (donât require a host for growth).
Diagram will add immense value in such questions. Keep writing. đ
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Rajlaxmi
In whole virus, mention different types- inactivated, live attenuated. In viral vector vaccine, mention that we use different virus as vector e.g adenovirus etc
You drew a diagram, that is very good. Also mRNA explanation is good. Define mRNA briefly when you start writing about it. Mention some of its advantages such as safe, highly efficient and fully synthetic (donât require a host for growth).
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Aabha
This is a pretty straight forward question, you have attempted well, but presentation could be better. Make simple diagrams for mRNA vaccine working , give examples- pfizer, moderna etc. Explanation is good.
You can mention some of its advantages such as safe, highly efficient and fully synthetic (donât require a host for growth).
Diagram will add immense value in such questions. Keep writing. đ
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Dr House
Whole virus vaccines are of two types- inactivated(in which virus is fully killed) and live but attenuated vaccine (in this virus is just weakened), Covaxin is inactivated one, I think you can correct that in the 1st point you mentioned.
In mRNA part, start with writing what do you understand by mRNA. Good that you drew a diagram. You can mention some of its advantages such as safe, highly efficient and fully synthetic (donât require a host for growth).
Rest of the answer is good, well-presented also. Keep writing. đ
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Rohan
Briefly mention how each type of vaccines work in 1 line each.
mRNA part is well written but diagram is missing, diagram will add immense value in such question, at least make a flowchart showing the steps in the working.
Introduction,conclusion are good.
Read some other answers.Keep writing. đ
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Shivanshu
This is a pretty straight forward question, you have attempted well, but presentation could be better. Make simple diagrams for mRNA vaccine working , at least make a flowchart showing steps in its working. Also, define what is mRNA.
You have skipped whole virus vaccines and its types such as inactivated vaccine, live attenuated vaccine while writing vaccine types. Mention them and briefly define each of these types in one line.
Introduction, examples and conclusion are good, you need to present better in such questions as everyone will have the content.
Keep writing. đ
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Mradul
Well-written answer but briefly write what do you understand by mRNA. Also, some of the advantages of mRNA vaccines such as safe, highly efficient and fully synthetic (donât require a host for growth) can be mentioned.
Diagram is excellent, presentation is also good. You should get good marks for such answers.
Keep writing. đ
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Sumita
You have attempted well, however, presentation can be better. Explain in 1 line about the vaccines in starting only where you have mentioned types. Also give examples.
Working of mRNA you have explained well, but you can make a diagram. You will have to write less, also it will give you extra marks. And then you can mention the advantages of mRNA over others in a combined way and then conclude.
You need to present better in such questions as everyone will have the content.
Keep writing. đ
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Vivek
You have attempted well, however, presentation can be better. Explain in 1 line about the vaccines in starting only where you have mentioned types.
Also try to make a diagram in such questions. You can make a diagram showing the steps of working of mRNA vaccines. Also what do you understand by mRNA term, mention that.
You will have to present very well in such questions to get extra marks, as everyone will have the content, pretty straight forward question.
Read some other answers.
Keep writing.:)
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@swatantra sir please review. Sorry for late uploading.
Vishnu
Try to upload on the same day, otherwise in future review might be delayed. You have uploaded all answers in one go I think.
You have written well in this answer. You can give recent examples of Covid vaccines in different vaccine categories.
Also you drew a diagram, that is very good, try to make it more neat and clean with proper labeling. Also explain what is mRNA first before writing its working, also you should write examples like Pfizer, Moderna etc and give some advantages such as safe, highly efficient and fully synthetic (donât require a host for growth).
Rest of the explanations are good. Keep writing. đ
4.5/10
I am working right now, it is becoming difficult for me, to write and upload on the same day. From next week onwards, I will write answers on the same day. Thanks a lot for such comprehensive review sir.
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