Mentor’s comment-
- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/up- love-jihad-law-religious- conversion-anti-conversion- law-7078370/ - https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/personal-choices- the-constitutions-endurance/ article33243159.ece - In the intro, briefly mention the stated objective of the ordinance.
- In the body discuss the various provision of the ordinance which are concerning like violation of the right to privacy, violation of Article 21 and curtailment of freedom of conscience under Article 25 etc
- Conclude by mentioning the need for revisiting the Rev Stainislaus v State of Madhya Pradesh (1977) judgement.
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4 responses to “The Uttar Pradesh Prohibition of Unlawful Conversion of Religion Ordinance, 2020 seeks to prevent illegal religious conversions. However, several provisions of the ordinance have raised concerns. What are the concerns with the ordinance? 10 marks”
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Hi SB
Give proper introduction, in this you can briefly mention the stated objective of the ordinance.
Content wise good attempt but need to present in a better way.
Fragment your content under different headings and subheadings.
Need to summarise your concluding remarks.
Avoid gramamtical errors.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Vaishnavi
Lackluster introduction, in the intro, briefly mention the stated objective of the ordinance.
Thumbs up for the structure.
Content is good.
Work on space management so that you can write your concluding remarks within the space limit.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing.