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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ personal-data-protection-bill- 2019-privacy-laws-7135832/ - In the intro, mention the need for such Bill for the increased importance of data.
- In the body, mention various provision and Data Protection Authority for protection of interest of an individual. In the next part, discuss issues such as autonomy of DPA, lack of expert in DPA, inadequate safeguards to protect privacy from the government etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for debate on the Bill or sending it to parliamentary committee.
Comments
4 responses to “Personal Data Protection Bill 2019 provides an opportunity for India to forge an agenda that will act as a standard-setter in national data protection legislation. Examine various provision in the Bill for the protection of privacy of an individual and also discuss the issues with certain provisions of the Bill. 10 marks”
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Hi Zulu
Good intro.
After the introduction, give a proper heading.
In the advantages, along with other points, mention that data localisation will also increase the ability of the Indian government to tax Internet giants. A strong data protection legislation will also help to enforce data sovereignty.
Concerns are discussed in a decent manner.
Use subheadings for better presentation.
Scan in proper light.
Keep working hard.
Try to write all the four answers.
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Hi RR
Good intro but try to summarise it.
In the advantages of the bill, also mention that data localisation will also increase the ability of the Indian government to tax Internet giants. A strong data protection legislation will also help to enforce data sovereignty.
Issues are discussed in a decent manner but try to use subheadings for better presentation.
Good conclusion.
Underline keywords.
Keep working hard.