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Land reforms remain an unfinished agenda even after 70 years of independence. Critically comment. 10 Marks

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Parth Verma

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  • In introduction,you have to  briefly highlight about the land reforms that have taken place in India post-independence. 
  • In the body  discuss how land reforms were carried out post-independence and their results. Discuss the fact that only some state implemented it properly while the other sought to preserve the status quo. Discuss why land reform is an unfinished agenda – non modernization of land records, increasing fragmentation of land holdings etc. Discuss the steps being taken still to complete the task of land reforms. 
  • Conclude by discussing the importance of completion of land reforms and highlight way forward

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12 responses to “Land reforms remain an unfinished agenda even after 70 years of independence. Critically comment. 10 Marks”

  1. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
    Dakshina Moorthy

    Please review the answer.

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Dakshina
      There is need to rephrase the introduction.
      Lack of content in the body of the answer.
      Mention steps taken to ensure distributive justice in India.
      Use subheadings like impact of these reforms and weakness etc.
      Make your answer presentable.
      Work on content.
      Plan the structure before writing.
      Work hard,you will improve.

  2. Chester Avatar
    Chester

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    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Chester
      Need to rephrase your introduction,grammatical mistakes are there.
      You have deviated from the demand of the question.
      Read mentor’s comment before writing,it will help you.
      Question is demanding why land reforms in India failed and what are the consequences of the same.
      Brainstorm before writing.
      Work on content and structure.
      Do not get demotivated by marks,keep writing,you will improve.

  3. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Please review

    1. Deepika Saini Avatar
      Deepika Saini

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    2. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Deepika
      Good introduction.
      Use of table to explain the land reforms is appreciable.
      Also discuss the fact that only some states implemented it properly.
      Try to cover more aspects to get better marks.
      Cite reasons why it failed.
      Conclusion is good.
      Improve handwriting.
      Keep writing.

  4. NJ_00 Avatar
    NJ_00

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    1. NJ_00 Avatar
      NJ_00

      @parth-verma1 :Sir please review 4 answers..

    2. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi
      Introduction is missing.
      Plan the structure before writing the answer.
      Read mentor’s comment before writing.
      Explain briefly the impact of the failure of land reforms and suggest some way forward.
      Also mention the current status of the land reforms.
      Try to diversify your answer.
      Use proper subheadings.
      Conclusion is good.
      Keep writing,you will improve.

  5. Parakh Sarda Avatar
    Parakh Sarda

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    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Parakh
      Introduction is good
      You have met the demand of the question.
      Also discuss the fact that only some states implemented it properly.
      Well structured answer.
      Avoid using short forms .
      Work on basic grammar and improve handwriting.
      Overall good attempt.
      Keep it up.

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