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- Introduce by defining the meaning of compassion.
- In the body, discuss how compassion leads to happiness. Then explain how compassion is relevant in public services.
- Conclude on the basis of above points.
“If you want others to be happy, practice compassion. If you want to be happy, practice compassion”. In what ways can a compassionate public official be more useful for realizing public service goals? 10 marks
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8 responses to ““If you want others to be happy, practice compassion. If you want to be happy, practice compassion”. In what ways can a compassionate public official be more useful for realizing public service goals? 10 marks”
tiwarisamiksha6@gmail.com
Hi Samiksha
Good introduction.
Content wise good attempt.
Try to write in straight lines.
You can also use some examples or quotes to diversify your answer .For example, here you can write – “Compassion is the basis of morality.”
Good conclusion.
Try to write all the four answers.
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Hi Krushna
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Good introduction.
Good example.
In the importance of compassion, you can also write that compassion and helping others gives a sense of satisfaction and fulfilment that makes the person in need and ourselves happy and satisfied.
Lackluster conclusion, conclude with reasserting the importance of compassion.
Underline keywords and avoid keywords.
Keep writing , you will improve.
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Hi Arun
Good introduction.
Your answer looks monotonous, refrain from it, underline keywords and write in points or a mix of points and small paragraphs.
You have discussed the importance of compassion for a civil servant in a decent manner, keep it up.
You can also add that compassion takes empathy and sympathy a step further. When you are compassionate, you feel the pain of another (i.e., empathy) or you recognize that the person is in pain (i.e., sympathy), and then you do your best to alleviate the person’s suffering from that situation. Thus, the emphasis here is on action and wanting to help.
Work on concluding remarks, conclude with reasserting the importance of compassion.
Underline more often and improve handwriting.
Try to write all the four questions.
Keep writing !
divyaloyola13@gmail.com
Hi Divya
Good introduction.
You have discussed the importance of compassion in a decent manner.
Giving example of compassionate kozikode is appreciable.
Good conclusion.
You can also use some quote.
Content wise good attempt.
Structure is also good.
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