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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/quadrilateral- home-truths/article32847152. ece - In the intro, briefly introduce what Quad is.
- In the body, discuss how the idea of Indo-Pacific forms the fulcrum of the Quad. In the next part, discuss the various factors that need to be taken into consideration while building on the idea of Indo-Pacific. Various factors include-lack of the historical background to the idea of Indo-Pacific, lack of enduring peace managed by the fringe powers, Importance of sea lines of communication for India etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to take into account these factors while deciding on the scope of Quad.
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9 responses to “Formulation of Quad and its emphasis on the Indo-Pacific has to pay heed to the history and geopolitics of Asia. Comment. 10 marks”
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Hi Geetanjali
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Hi Jojo
Good introduction but try to avoid writing numerical figures . For example, instead of writing 4 countries , write four countries.
Give proper headings.
Write the way forward, you can write that reconciling the capacity to resist armed revisionism while nudging the region’s geopolitics towards cooperation as opposed to conflict should be India’s, and the Quad’s, priority.
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Work on content.
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Good introduction but write some more data on quad like it has a shared objective of ensuring a free, open and prosperous Indo-Pacific region. The idea of grouping was first mooted by Japanese Prime Minister Shinzo Abe in 2007.
You have discussed the factors for consideration in a decent manner but try to write these points under subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Good conclusion.
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Hi Arun
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First thing, you answer looks monotonous, work on it, use headings and subheadings and underline important stuff.
Good introduction but write some more data on quad like it has a shared objective of ensuring a free, open and prosperous Indo-Pacific region. The idea of grouping was first mooted by Japanese Prime Minister Shinzo Abe in 2007.
Some good points but need to add more content .
In the way forward, you can also write that reconciling the capacity to resist armed revisionism while nudging the region’s geopolitics towards cooperation as opposed to conflict should be India’s, and the Quad’s priority.
Work on presentation.
Keep writing , you will improve.