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Hi Taran
Good introduction.
You can make a flow chart explaining the types of winds, it will make your presentation of the answer better and will save you some space too.
You have not mentioned the land and sea breeze, they are also local winds.
Add content in your answer.
For example foehn helps in making pasture land ready for animal grazing and help the grapes to ripe early and chinook keep the grasslands clear of snow and very helpful to ranchers,Bora is associated with the passage of a temperate cyclone etc.
Conclusion is good.
As this is a static question so read many times to retain the data in the exam,
Work hard,you will succeed.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You are good in making diagrams,keep it up.
Content is good and well placed.
You have written crisp and concise and according to the demand of the question.
A decent attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers,you can join our Mains Guidance Program for betterment and quality enrichment of your answers.
Persistence is the key to success,keep writing.
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Hi Kritika
Good introduction,you have explained the difference in a decent manner.
The answer is not well structured.
You can refer Deepika’s answer for better content and structure.
Explain the impact of mountain and sea breeze also.
Make some relevant diagrams to get better marks.
Underline important stuff .
Conclusion is good.
Be crisp and concise in 10 marker questions.
Work hard !
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
You have explained the difference in a decent manner,keep it up.
Use of diagrams is appreciable.
Content is good and well placed.
Concluding remarks are good.
Overall a decent attempt !
There are grammatical errors,work on basic grammar.
Improve handwriting.
Keep writing !
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Hi NJ
In introduction itself,differentiate the winds briefly.
Name the local winds, you can use a flow chart for that.
You have mentioned the non-periodical winds only, mention the periodical winds also i.e. mountain and valley, land and sea breeze.
Use of diagrams is appreciable.
Mention their impact on livelihood of people and their significance.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing !
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Hi Parth
While I was writing I realized that I have made mistake in direction of Westerlies. Should it be left as such in the paper to avoid cutting the answer?
Hi Parakh
Mention the name of local winds,you can use a flow chart for that.
Differentiate the winds briefly.
In the influence part, you need to add more points.
You have differentiated the local winds in hot winds and cold winds, that is wrong, the better way will be differentiate in periodical and non-periodical winds, this differentiation will cover the local winds comprehensively.
Make suitable diagrams like land and sea breeze,mountain and valley breeze etc to make your answer presentable.
Conclusion is good.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
Content is good,diverse and well placed !
As this is the static question of geograpgy,use of diagram is must for better answers.
You have made diagrams but need more diagrams like land and sea breeze,mountain and valley breeze etc to fetch good marks.
Impact part is written in decent manner but try to use subheadings for better presentation.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing !
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