Mentor’s comment:
- https://www.civilsdaily.com/news/op-ed-of-the-day-economic-reforms-are-best-done-brick-by-boring-brick/
- In the intro, briefly describe what do you mean by economic reforms.
- In the main body, describe how economic reforms are carried out. Sudden reform like in 1991 or stealth reform brought in through executive orders and third type in which it is brought in slowly but incrementally and elaborate on its advantages.
- In conclusion, stress the importance of the type of reform you agreed with and the need to go that way of reform.
Comments
7 responses to “Do you agree with the view that economic reforms in the country are best-done brick by brick instead of big-bang reforms? Give reasons in support of your argument. (15 Marks)”
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Please avoid too much cutting in your answers.
With your handwriting, presentation becomes an important part in your answers and hence try not to commit too many errors and mistakes in presentation. Think properly before writing so that you do not have to make too many corrections or cuttings in your answers.
The main body of the answer is good.
After intro, discuss the need for economic reforms in current scenarios.
Give proper way forwards.
Read the model answer for those way forwards.
Points in the main body are good.
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The points and content are ok.
The direction of the answer is nice.
Structuring needs improvement.
Excellent way forwards.
Language is satisfactory.
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Awesome analogy in the intro!!! Keep it up!
But the missing way forward is a sore point in the answer.
Apart from that, a good answer.
The content is perfect in the main body.
The examples quoted are exhaustive and to the point.
Always write proper way forward towards the end which should be separate from your conclusion. Conclusion is ending or the summary of your answer.
Way forward are solutions or steps needed to be taken.
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