Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction define what EI is.
- In the body, explain that emotional intelligence is the ability to understand and express our emotions to meet the requirements of day-to-day living, learning, and relating to others. Briefly narrate the importance of EI. Discuss the skills required – self-awareness, social skills, optimism etc. Highlighting the advantages of developing emotional intelligence for administration.
- Conclude by reasserting importance of EI.
Comments
6 responses to “Discuss the skills that are required to become emotionally intelligent while highlighting the advantages of developing emotional intelligence for administration. 10 marks”
divyaloyola13@gmail.com
Hi Divya
Good introduction.
Skills require for emotional intelligence are discussed in a good manner.
Use of various examples is appreciable, keep it up.
Content wise good attempt.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.
tiwarisamiksha6@gmail.com
Hi Samiksha
Do not give examples in the introduction.
Work on space management, substantiate the bullet points of the components of EI in 1-2 lines each.
After the components, give the heading- Advantages of Emotional Intelligence in administration , then write your content.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.
krushnapatilpk@gmail.com
Hi Krushna
Good introduction.
Concepts of EI are there in your answer , need to add more like optimism and social skills.
Advantages of EI in administration are discussed in a decent manner.
Work on concluding remarks.
Underline important stuff.
Keep writing, you will succeed.