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- In the introduction start by suggesting key social reformers of 19th century.
- The main body should focus on how early social reformers wanted to enlighten Indians that Sati, infanticide etc. should be banned not because that would be conformant with the European ideals of rationalism, empiricism, monotheism and individualism but because they are not allowed in the Indian religious text. How they wanted to preserve the society while changing the behaviors of its members. Discuss different contributors of the social reforms.
- Conclude with importance of their contributions.
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6 responses to “Discuss the contributions of social reformers of 19th century in the making of modern India. 10 marks”
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Hi RR
First thing refrain from monotony, use headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Content wise good attempt, but also mention Aligarh and Ahmadiya movements.
Good conclusion.
Underline important stuff.
Keep working hard.
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Hi SRP
Good intro.
Refrain from monotony, use proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Avoid writing in long paragraphs, write in points .
Some good points but need to work on content, mentiion Aligarh and Ahmadiya movements, Ramakrishna mission etc.
Underline keywords.
Keep writing.
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Hi KG
Good intro.
You have covered multiple dimensions , keep it up.
Also mention Aligarh and Ahmadiya movements.
Avoid scribbling while writing.
Thumbs up for the conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing.