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Disaster Management Act-2005 has been invoked by the government to deal with the Covid-19 pandemic, but the provisions of the Acts suggests that it is not well suited to deal with the circumstances created by the pandemic.” Comment. 10 marks

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9 responses to “Disaster Management Act-2005 has been invoked by the government to deal with the Covid-19 pandemic, but the provisions of the Acts suggests that it is not well suited to deal with the circumstances created by the pandemic.” Comment. 10 marks”

  1. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
    Dakshina Moorthy

    Please review the answer.

    1. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
      Dakshina Moorthy

      @parth-verma1 please review the answer

    2. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Dakshina
      Work on basic grammar and rephrase your introduction.
      Some good points but you can add more to fetch good marks like lack of grievance mechanism etc.
      Write some suggestions also.
      good conclusion.
      Work on handwriting,it should be neat and legible.
      Work hard,you will improve.

  2. NJ_00 Avatar
    NJ_00

    MOJO0206200D40884686

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Try to write a catchy introduction
      The main body of the answer is decently attempted.
      Content is rich and well placed but
      you could have mention the examples of various countries to diversify your answer.
      Need to work upon presentation and language
      Conclusion is missing,do not end your answer without concluding remarks
      keep practicing !

  3. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Please review.

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Deepika
      Lackluster introduction,mention the lockdown situation and why various legal provisions needed to be invoked.
      You have discussed the body of the answer in a decent manner.
      Also give examples of various countries as mentioned in the mentor’s comment.
      Try to cover more verticals to get good marks.
      Overall a decent attempt.
      Keep writing.

  4. Parakh Sarda Avatar
    Parakh Sarda

    Please Review OrderID – ~0000232028

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Parakh
      Introduction should be catchy,write about the pandemic and why there is a need to invoke DM Act.
      You have deviated from the demand of the question.
      Read mentor’s comment before writing the answer.
      Write about task force report and give examples of the various countries.
      Brainstorm before writing.
      Adhere to the demand of the question.
      Do not get demotivated by marks.
      Work hard,you will improve.

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