Mentor’s comment-
- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ atmanirbhar-bharat-self- reliance-indian-agriculture- 6513827/ - In the intro, mention the case of Urea import.
- In the body, focus on the three-seed, fertilisers and machinery. In the case of seeds India, has been exporter but still, there is a lot to do in this case. In case of Urea, gas price and government policies need to be revised, in case of machinery, the tale of tractor production in India should serve as an inspiration.
- Conclude by mention the potential of Atmanirbhar in agriculture and its benefits for the farmers and the Indian economy.
Comments
12 responses to “Despite having the potential to transform itself into the exporter of agri-inputs, India ends up being the importer of some of them. In light of this examine India’s potential to become the exporter of agri-input products and suggest the measures to achieve this. 10 marks”
Payment ID: #0000230867
Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Potential of India’s agri import export is well explained.
You have explained the reasons in a decent manner.
In the way forward, along with other points , mention these terms “Uberisation of tractor services” , Privatization of seed production etc.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
#0000223024
Hi Taran
Good introduction.
In the reasons, do not tell about the potential, write proper reasons.
For example, in seeds, you can write that the continuous battle of government against large seed companies, especially multinationals and their Indian joint ventures, on issues such as trait fees has prevented companies from introducing new generation of seeds .
In the way forward, along with other points , mention these terms “Uberisation of tractor services” , privatization of seed production etc.
Read comprehensively to enrich your content.
Good conclusion.
Work on sentence formation.
Keep writing, you will improve.
Order no. #0000233081
Hi Dakshina
Work on introduction, it should be catchy.
In the reasons, when you are writing about machinery, focus on the issues for small farmers– In an economy of small landholders, owning a tractor is a high cost proposition as it is not fully utilized. This needs to be made more efficient by creating a market for tractor services.
In the way forward, along with other points , mention these terms “Uberisation of tractor services” , privatization of seed production etc.
In the way forward, try to address the issues which you have mentioned .
Good conclusion.
Work on sentence formation.
Keep writing, you will improve.
Please Review OrderID – ~0000232028
Hi Parakh
Need to rephrase your introduction.
You have deviated from the demand of the question, the question is asking why India ends up being the importer of agri-inputs.
Cite the reasons and write the way forward by explaining how we can lessen our agri-inputs.
Then conclude by mentioning the potential of Atmanirbhar in agriculture and its benefits for the farmers and the Indian economy.
Go through the newspaper link provided to you in the question.
Work hard, you will improve.
pay_FDALbw6305ZjIX
Hi PS
Rephrase your introduction.
You have explained the potential of agri-inputs in a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
In the reasons, when you are writing about machinery, focus on the issues for small farmers– In an economy of small landholders, owning a tractor is a high cost proposition as it is not fully utilized. This needs to be made more efficient by creating a market for tractor services.
In the way forward, along with other points , mention these terms “Uberisation of tractor services” , privatization of seed production etc.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep working hard, you will succeed.
Payment id : #0000237030
Hi Unnati
You have uploaded wrong answer sheet, upload again.