Mentor’s comment-
- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ punjab-farmers-protests-farm- laws-7094357/ - In the intro, mention the context of farmers’ protest against the Farm Laws.
- In the body, mention the role played by Punjab and the surrounding region in making India self-sufficient in food requirement by increasing the wheat and rice production. Next, mention the problems related to the Green Revolution. In the measures suggest crop diversification and provision of a package by the Centre and State to facilitate the diversification.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to address the farmers concerns and making provisions for the diversification of the crops in the region.
Comments
3 responses to “Declining benefits accrued from the Green Revolution to Punjab and the surrounding area have created problems of their own which have led to the agitation by the farmers of this region on various issues. In light of this, discuss the challenges faced by the farmers in the region of the Green Revolution and suggest the ways to deal with it. 10 marks”
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(Sir, am I writing enough words or should I write more)
Hi Arun
Good introduction.
There are so many spelling mistakes, work on it.
You have met the demand of the question in a decent manner.
You can add a brief conclusion.
Word limit is fine.
Underline keywords and avoid grammatical errors.
Do not get demoralised by the marks, keep writing, you will succeed.
thank you for the review sir