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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/tamil- nadu-police-custodial-deaths- torture-guarding-the- guardians-6484025/ - In the intro, explain custodial torture.
- In the body explain how it is an extra-judicial element in the criminal justice system, how it brings humanity to the lowest level, how it is against the norms of society and Constitutional obligation of Fundamental Rights, also mention that India is not a signatory to UN rights against torture.
- In the steps taken- take points from reports of law commission and various judicial intervention.
- Conclude by stating the seriousness of the crime in the democratic system.
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21 responses to “Custodial torture is an anathema to democracy. Examine the issues related to custodial torture and how is it against the basic fundamental rights? What steps should be taken to prevent such acts by the police functionaries? 10 marks”
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Hi Taran
Rephrase your introduction, you can write the definition given by the Supreme Court, “custodial torture” is a naked violation of human dignity and a degradation which destroys, to a very large extent human personality.
First give some causes of custodial torture like-
– Absence of Strong Legislation
-Institutional Challenges- The entire prison system is inherently opaque giving less room to transparency
Then give some suggestions like India should ratify the UN Convention Against torture, need of police reforms etc.
Follow a proper structure to get better marks.
Lackluster conclusion,conclude by stating the seriousness of the crime in the democratic system.
Work on content.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
Use of flow chart is appreciable.
Use proper headings and subheading to present your answer in a better manner.
For example give heading- causes of torture then explain the causes briefly under different subheadings.
Mention some causes of custodial torture like-
– Absence of Strong Legislation
-Institutional Challenges- The entire prison system is inherently opaque giving less room to transparency.
What you have written is the impact of custodial torture, give a heading for that too,
Measures are well explained.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
After explaining the custodial torture, write briefly the causes and impact of theses tortures.
You can quote some data also of National Crime Records Bureau (NCRB) .
Try to cover different dimensions to get better marks.
In the measures part, also write about the need of police reforms and implementation of Law Commission of India’s 273rd Report.
Good conclusion.
Write neat and legible.
Work on presentation and structure of the answer.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
Issues are explained in a comprehensive manner.
After issues,write briefly the causes and impact of theses tortures.
You can quote some data also of National Crime Records Bureau (NCRB) .
Try to cover different dimensions to get better marks.
Suggested measures and way ahead are well explained, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Be consistent,you will succeed.
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Hi NJ
Good introduction.
Try to understand the task word of the question,explain how custodial torture is an anathema to democracy.
Then write briefly the causes and impact of theses tortures.
Always try to explain your subheadings in one or two lines, if not then do not make it a subheading.
You have covered the measures in a comprehensive manner.
Work on space management.
Write crisp and concise.
Good conclusion.
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Hi Vishesh
Good introduction.
Try to understand the task word of the question,explain how custodial torture is an anathema to democracy.
After the issues, mention briefly the causes and impact of these tortures.
Need to work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Work on handwriting.
Select the words for headings wisely.
Need to add some more points in the measures,you can write India should ratify the UN Convention Against Torture, need of police reforms etc.
Work on content.
Avoid grammatical mistakes.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Sneha
Good introduction,
After introduction, explain briefly how custodial torture is an anathema to democracy.
Use of flow chart in explaining the causes is appreciable.
You have covered quite decent points in the way forward, you can also write that India should ratify the UN Convention Against Torture, need of police reforms etc.
Good conclusion.
Content is good and well placed.
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Hi Rahul
Try to complete your answer in maximum 2 pages.
Write crisp and concise.
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Hi Teja
Good introduction.
Explain briefly how custodial torture is an anathema to democracy as it is directly mentioned in the question.
You have covered the issues in a comprehensive manner.
Along with other measures, you can also write that India should ratify the UN Convention Against Torture, need of police reforms etc.
Work on your presentation, write neat and legible, leave proper space between the lines.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep writing,you will succeed.
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Hi Sumona
Good introduction.
Explain briefly how custodial torture is an anathema to democracy as it is directly mentioned in the question.
You have only discussed the FRs, need to add more points like absence of strong legislation,
not adhering to international standard etc.
Try to cover comprehensively to fetch better marks.
Lack of content in measures , you can write that India should ratify the UN Convention Against Torture,implementation of Law Commission of India’s 273rd report etc.
Write crisp and concise.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard,you will improve.