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https://www.civilsdaily.com/news/op-ed-snap-socio-economic-issues-focus-area-of-budget-2019/
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Source:
https://www.civilsdaily.com/news/op-ed-snap-socio-economic-issues-focus-area-of-budget-2019/
Hi Divya,
-Nice introductory line…but avoid saying ‘I would like to quote’…quote should directly be mentioned…
-Points mentioned are good and arranged…
-However, conclusion could have been better…here we need to praise the initiatives with their utilitarian principles…The rest is good..
Overall, nice attempt…well written answer…
Keep writing…
Marks awarded: 7.5/12.5
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