Are families a Universal social institution in India? Analyse.10 Marks

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  • In the introduction  briefly explain how the family is recognized as an element of a broader kinship network that links ancestors
    and descendants of a person.
  • In the body you can explain that it is the most permanent and most persistent of all social institutions which exerts
    constant influence in life of the members from the moment of birth to the moment of death.
    Then briefly explain the main characteristics and functions of family.
    Discuss why Indian families are more of a Universal social institution; provide for comparison with
    other countries.
  • Conclude with significance of family system in the Indian context.

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16 responses to “Are families a Universal social institution in India? Analyse.10 Marks”

  1. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Please review

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      Deepika Saini

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    2. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Deepika
      Introduction should be brief,not of two paragraphs.
      You have mentioned the functions of the family in a good manner,thumbs up !
      Mention in brief the changes in universal quality of family system in India like from joint to nuclear family,change in authority etc.
      Lackluster conclusion,conclude with significance of the family system.
      keep writing !

  2. Vishesh Chaurasia Avatar
    Vishesh Chaurasia

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    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Vishesh
      Rephrase your introduction.
      No need to explain these many diverse forms of families of India.
      Good use of flow chart.
      Mention in brief the changes in universal quality of family system in India like from joint to nuclear family,change in authority,migration factors etc.
      Good conclusion.
      Work on basic grammar.
      Improve your handwriting.

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    NJ_00

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      Prayas

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      NJ_00

      I joined AWE in Feb 2020 for 2 months but after 1 month it got postponed till prelims.. So this is my 2nd month from 15 June..

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  4. Venkatesh Avatar
    Venkatesh

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    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Venkatesh !
      Good quote !
      Some good points but need to diversify your answer.
      Mention the causes like accelerated rate of rural-urban migration, diversification of gainful economic activities and individual-friendly property laws etc.
      Underline keywords.
      Do not use unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
      Overall a decent attempt.

  5. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
    Dakshina Moorthy

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    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Dakshina
      Unit of sociological analysis ?
      Rephrase your introduction.
      Deviated from the demand of the question,the question is not asking about patriarchy.
      Brainstorm before writing.
      Mention the causes of change like accelerated rate of rural-urban migration, diversification of gainful economic activities and individual-friendly property laws etc.
      Diversify your answer.
      Keep writing,you will improve.

  6. Chester Avatar
    Chester

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    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Chester
      Good introduction.
      You have explain the importance of family in a good manner.
      Legal backing for divorce is irrelevant point here.
      Good examples of festivals,you can diversify more.
      Lackluster conclusion,mention briefly the significance of family system.
      A good try but work hard to improve.

  7. Parakh Sarda Avatar
    Parakh Sarda

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    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Parakh
      Good introduction.
      Family gives us food- irrelevant point,instead write points like the families play an important role in preserving and promoting the cultural and social values in a society.
      Need to work upon content.
      Structure is there .
      Need to work on basic grammar.
      Improve your handwriting,make it legible.
      Keep writing !

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