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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/the-covid-19- fiscal-response-and-indias- standing/article32154153.ece - In the intro, mention the stimulus package figures.
- In the body, you can mention IMF Policy Tracker comparison, next compare value of the package as a percentage of GDP with other countries. In the comparison of cash transfers against public works mention the figure and adoption of cash transfer in the world while mentioning the strength of MGNREGA in India’s perspective.
- Conclude by stressing the need to do more.
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8 responses to “Analyse India’s fiscal response to Covid-19 in comparison to other countries. Also, compare the adoption of cash transfer against public work for income support in India. 10 marks”
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have compared the fiscal response in quite a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
In the way forward, stress on MGNREGA, you can write that India has been a leader in employment guarantee policies with its flagship MGNREGA program. This is the right time to expand entitlements in this program as well as introduce an urban version of the program.
Also mention the need of additional fiscal outlay — in the form of cash and in-kind transfers and expanded public works schemes .
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting,avoid scribbling.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
After the comparison, give some way forward under a separate heading.
Along with enhancing MGNREGA, mention the need of additional fiscal outlay — in the form of cash and in-kind transfers and expanded public works schemes , this would save lives and jobs today and might prevent a protracted slowdown.
Good conclusion.
Work on sentence formation, some of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Work hard,you will succeed.
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Hi Unnati
Good introduction but need to summarise it.
Give proper headings and subheadings, refrain from monotony.
Before writing the concerns, analyse India’s fiscal response to Covid-19 in comparison to other countries.
You have deviated from the demand of the question.
In the way forward, stress on MGNREGA, you can write that India has been a leader in employment guarantee policies with its flagship MGNREGA program. This is the right time to expand entitlements in this program as well as introduce an urban version of the program.
Also mention the need of additional fiscal outlay — in the form of cash and in-kind transfers and expanded public works schemes .
Good conclusion.
Some good points are there but need to work on content.
Improve your handwriting, leave proper space between the lines and after the paragraphs.
Keep writing !
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
You have compared the fiscal response in quite a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
Along with enhancing MGNREGA in the suggested strategy, mention the need of additional fiscal outlay — in the form of cash and in-kind transfers and expanded public works schemes , this would save lives and jobs today and might prevent a protracted slowdown.
Your content is good and well placed.
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt.
Keep writing,you will succeed.