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Diligence is an imperative value for a civil servant as it stems from the belief that work is an end in itself and not a means to an end. Explain. 10 marks

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  •  The question is about the concept of ethical due diligence, so in introduction we have to define what is diligence.
  • In the body we have to discuss the concept of diligence. Then highlight its importance in civil services – why is it essential to profess due diligence? To what extent is it required by civil servants etc. Also  discuss how to inculcate  it
  • We have to conclude with significance of diligence in civil services.

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9 responses to “Diligence is an imperative value for a civil servant as it stems from the belief that work is an end in itself and not a means to an end. Explain. 10 marks”

  1. Shravya Rendla Avatar
    Shravya Rendla

    How to upload the written answer scripts?

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Shravya upload your scanned answers with the attachment link given in the comment section.

  2. Chester Avatar
    Chester

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    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Chester you need to work on spellings
      in your answer ,rephrase needed in some points.
      avoid using short forms like w.r.t.
      underline keywords to convince examiner easily.
      structure of answer is good but content could be better.
      Do not demotivated by the marks,keep writing,you will improve !
      Marks-3/10

  3. NJ_00 Avatar
    NJ_00

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    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi NJ
      your content is good but you have to work on presentation
      and basic grammar.
      Use relevant examples of various civil servants and personalities.
      lackluster conclusion,it should be catchy
      structure of answer is good
      well diversified points.
      underline only keywords.
      good attempt,keep it up !
      Marks-4/10

  4. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Please review

    1. Deepika Saini Avatar
      Deepika Saini

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    2. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Deepika
      Good introduction
      You can also start the introduction with some quote.
      You can diversify your answer by giving proper examples of various personalities.
      For example-Gandhiji’s first hunger strike as an example of selfless diligence.
      Conclusion is good.
      The answer is according to the demand of the question.
      Keep it up.
      Marks-4/10

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