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Sumita
Good attempt. You have covered all aspects of the answer quite well.
Introduction is good.
While illustrating about ‘all-alignment’ you can talk about India’s participation in multiple groupings with different perspectives.. For example, Quad, SCO and BRICS, trilateral groupings such as RIC, JAI etc. Other points are good.
India’s handling of SCO members are also fine, some positive developments wherever possible can be mentioned. For example, in case of Iran, Chahbahar port can be talked about, also India didn’t completely cut ties, so that point can be framed better. In case of Russia, investment in Russian far east can be mentioned.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Alankrit
Decent attempt. Introduction and first part of the answer are really good. You can use more examples of India’s participation in groupings with different perspectives such as SCO, BRICS, I2U2, trilateral groupings such as RIC, JAI etc.
Other points are fine.
In next part, you can go countrywise where you can show how India is trying to tackle various members with very different attitudes towards India for example, Russia, Iran, China, Pakistan etc
Rather than mentioning generic points, you can write positives-negatives in relationship with each country to show India’s pragmatic strategy of all-alignment irrespective of the country it is dealing with.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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