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Pranav
Decent attempt. Introduction is good, explanation of EI is also fine.
Next two parts are fine too, you can mention role of EI in better communication, increase in efficiency and productivity. You can use some examples too to substantiate your points.
Before concluding, however, mention that only EQ is not sufficient in present day and age, at the end of the day IQ matters too- need to have skills, training etc in order to be successful.
Conclusion is fine, at the end you can also talk about maintaining a harmonious balance between EQ and IQ.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Akshada
Good attempt. Introduction and explanation of emotional intelligence is good, use of flowchart is also nice.
Benefits mentioned are fine, however you can elaborate a bit by using examples. Further you can mention points like it leads to better communication and leadership, good work-life balance (can be added in 1st point), empathy and tolerance etc
Lack of EI part is fine.
Before concluding, however, mention that only EQ is not sufficient in present day and age, at the end of the day IQ matters too- need to have skills, training etc in order to be successful.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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