Mentor’s Comments-
- Introduce by explaining the meaning of globalisation.
- Explain how the process of globalisation is incredibly efficient.
- Write points to justify that globalisation has been incredibly unjust as well.
- Conclude accordingly.
Q.1 Globalization is incredibly efficient but has so far been incredibly unjust. Examine the statement in the context of developing countries like India. (10 Marks)
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6 responses to “Q.1 Globalization is incredibly efficient but has so far been incredibly unjust. Examine the statement in the context of developing countries like India. (10 Marks)”
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Anurag
You have addressed the question broadly. Plus presentation can be improved.
Don’t write all parts in flowcharts.
Intro is fine.
In efficiency, you can also talk about things like increased employment opportunities, increased access to resources, access to cheap labour etc
Other points are fine, don’t make it India specific, you can use examples from India such as development of IT industry etc
Points in next part are fine too, some points can be elaborated for example how inequality has been created etc
Environmental concerns can be mentioned too.
Conclusion is decent.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Karun
Decent attempt. Introduction is fine.
In next part, you have mentioned effects of globalisation rather than explaining how it is efficient.
You can mention things like increased employment opportunities, increased access to resources, access to cheap labour, increased cross-border investment etc
In next part, points are good.. Things like intra and inter- national disproportionate growth, exposure to speculative bubbles and environmental concerns can be mentioned too.
Examples can be integrated with points in the body itself.
In conclusion, you can mention rising anti-globalisation movements, xenophobia against immigrants due to rising inequality and job losses.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Javed
Intro is fine.
After that mention a section on how globalization is efficient- can mention things like increased employment opportunities, increased access to resources, access to cheap labour, increased cross-border investment etc
Next mention the negatives. Points are good. You can use examples to illustrate them.
Environmental concerns etc can be mentioned too.
Write a concluding statement.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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