Q.1 What were the reasons behind the failure of the League of Nations? How did this failure shape the formation of the United Nations as its successor? (10 Marks)

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2 responses to “Q.1 What were the reasons behind the failure of the League of Nations? How did this failure shape the formation of the United Nations as its successor? (10 Marks)”

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   December 18, 2021

   Abdesh Chaudhary

   Dear sir,
   please have a look on my answer. It is my first try. please guide to what is needed.

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      January 19, 2022

      Staff @CD

      Abdesh

      Please mention reference ID for reviews.

      For first attempt, you have done well.

      Intro first few lines ia good. No need to mention concert of Europe in detail.
      In 10 marker questions, try to stick to what is asked as there is less scope for writing much.
      Make subheadings from the question itself, this will help you identify what all to write.
      For example, here you can mention 2 subheadings- reasons for failure of league of nations; how the failure shaped UN.
      First part has been tackled well by you, in 2nd part try to mention some points – learnings from treaty of Versailles fiasco(avoiding humiliation of defeated powers), almost universal membership, structural learnings etc
      Also try to provide a proper conclusion, quotes etc can be mentioned there; avoid them in the middle of the answer.
      Anyway, good attempt. Keep practicing. 🙂