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- In the introduction define what you understand by emotional intelligence.
- In the body explain that by improving your EQ and taking active steps to make changes, you’ll find you are more productive and can build more productive relationships around you. EI is important for everyone who wants to be career ready. Drawing on the work of Daniel Goleman, explain the five pillars of emotional intelligence and how they give you an advantage in the workforce.
Mention the steps that you would have taken to develop EI. - Conclude with importance.
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6 responses to “Emotional intelligence in recent times has become the buzzword for determining the success of a person. Do you agree? If yes, mention the steps you have taken in your life to develop emotional intelligence. 10 marks”
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Hi Divya
Introduction should be of one small paragraph.
According to Daniel Goleman, there are 5 key elements of EI, you have missed ‘MOTIVATION’.
In the steps part, rephrase your first point.
Rest of the steps are really good.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep working hard !
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Hi Arun
In the introduction, first define what do you mean by EI. You can write that it is the ability to understand and manage your own emotions, and those of the people around you.
You can quote Daniel Goleman and his five components of EI.
Suggested steps are good.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by reasserting the significance of EI.
Follow a proper structure to fetch better marks.
Work on content and handwriting.
Keep writing , you will improve !
Please review
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Hi Vinay
Good introduction.
You have explained the concept of EI in a comprehensive manner.
Thumbs up for your work in your NSS days.
Good conclusion.
Structure of the answer is also good.
A decent attempt.
Keep writing !