Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction explain and justify the fact that Australia is one of the major producers of wool.
- In the body explain in detail the factors necessary for producing wool – climatic factor, land size, economy of scales etc. Explain the nature of raw material, market locations etc. Then discuss why Australia despite being major producer of wool is not a major finished garments producer – explain the factors of demand, market etc.
- Conclude with way forward.
Comments
8 responses to “Australia is a major supplier of wool but not a major supplier of finished woolen garments, why? Analyse the aspects leading to such a trend. 10 marks”
Kindly check
Hi Jojo
Introduction is missing, always start your answer with some introductory lines.
Try to cover more dimensions in your answer to fetch better marks.
Explain the nature of raw material, market locations etc.
In the causes part, also write that the producers in the southern continents have generally warmer climates and thus constitute a smaller market.
Conclude with way forward.
Work on presentation.
Do not get demoralised by the marks, keep writing, you will improve.
Kindly evaluate
Hi Geetanjali
Please scan in higher resolution and then resend.
It is not legible.
Hello Sir, kindly verify now
Pls review
Transaction ID: P2010131144312057697645
Hi Arun
Good introduction.
Lack of content in the main body.
You did not answer the first part of the question, explain in detail the factors necessary for producing wool – climatic factor, land size, economy of scales etc. Explain the nature of raw material, market locations etc.
Always substantiate your bullet points in one or two lines.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Conclude with way forward that how Australia can improve, do not write about India.
Keep writing, you will improve.