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- In the introduction explain in short the context of the question.
- In the body explain how the regional aspirations of the North-East became the focal point of the north-east and gained prominence in the 80’s. Explain/list down the various challenges of North-east
that were against the cause of integration such as demand for autonomy, movements against outsiders, secessionist movements etc. - Conclude with the recent movements too and that even after integration the region remains still disconnected from the mainland in many terms.
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12 responses to “Discuss specific challenges that were witnessed especially during the integration of North-East India post-independence. 10 marks”
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction but need to summarise it.
Before writing the challenges, write some background, you can write before 1947, the whole of North- East India, excluding Manipur and Tripura was Assam, then mention briefly how seven sisters came into existence.
Explain briefly how north-east region is strategically important.
Challenges and way ahead are decently explained.
Try to cover different aspects in an answer to fetch better marks.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Dakshina
Rephrase your introduction.
Before writing the challenges, write some background, you can write before 1947, the whole of North- East India, excluding Manipur and Tripura was Assam, then mention briefly how seven sisters came into existence.
Explain briefly how north-east region is strategically important.
Work on headings, give more precise headings.
In the challenges, also write the issue of trans-border migration from Bangladesh, that is a major factor for the problems in Assam and other areas of the North East.
Challenges are well explained.
Also write some way forward, how to develop this region.
Good conclusion.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Chester
Refrain from such long sentences in the introduction.
Be specific while giving headings, instead of writing ‘these factors are’ , write – ‘Issues in North east’.
Before writing the challenges, write some background, you can write before 1947, the whole of North- East India, excluding Manipur and Tripura was Assam, then mention briefly how seven sisters came into existence.
Explain briefly how north-east region is strategically important.
Measures done are explained in a decent manner but write some way forward also.
Good conclusion.
Try to cover different aspects to get better marks.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Sneha
Lackluster introduction, you can start like the history of the Indian nation-state is a history of integration of diverse ethnic groups, then write about the North-East integration.
You have explained the challenges in a comprehensive manner, but also explain briefly how north-east region is strategically important.
Measures done are explained in a decent manner but write some way forward also, how to develop this region.
Good conclusion.
The content is good and well placed.
Keep writing , you will succeed.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Before writing the challenges, write some background, you can write before 1947, the whole of North- East India, excluding Manipur and Tripura was Assam, then mention briefly how seven sisters came into existence.
Explain briefly how north-east region is strategically important.
Challenges are explained in a decent manner.
Write some of the government measures done for overcoming these challenges.
Good conclusion.
Work on content, read comprehensively to enrich it.
Try to cover different aspects to get better marks.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Keep writing, you will improve.
Kindly review
Hi Sakshi
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Good introduction.
Leave some space after the paragraphs and between the lines.
Before writing the challenges, write some background, you can write before 1947, the whole of North- East India, excluding Manipur and Tripura was Assam, then mention briefly how seven sisters came into existence.
Explain briefly how north-east region is strategically important.
Challenges are explained in a decent manner.
Avoid writing long paragraphs, work on presentation to get better marks.
Write some of the government measures done for overcoming these challenges.
Good conclusion.
Avoid spelling mistakes and do not use short forms.
Keep writing, you will improve.