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- In the introduction define what you understand by Ethics.
- In the body there is a need of narrative of examples justifying that ethics doesn’t just mean the final end but the process that takes one to the end. Bring in philosophies of moral thinkers, ideologies that
justify means are equally important as that of ends. - Conclude with importance of Ethics in general.
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13 responses to “Ethics are less a goal than a pathway, less a destination than a trip, less an inoculation than a process. Illustrate. 10 marks”
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have justified properly that ethics doesn’t just mean the final end but the process that takes one to the end.
Quoting personalities is appreciable.
Good concluding remarks.
A decent attempt.
You have the hold over ethics, work hard , it can provide you an edge .
Keep writing.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
You have quote various personalities, that is appreciable , but there is a need of narrative of examples justifying that ethics doesn’t just mean the final end but the process that takes one to the end.
Evaluate some general situations like stealing food to feed a child.
Rest of the content is good and diverse.
In ethics paper, try to give some of your own examples to get better marks.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Use of diagram in depicting the pathway is appreciable.
Quote some of the personalities like Mahatma Gandhi.
You have given the examples of past events, appreciable , but there is also a need of narrative of examples justifying that ethics doesn’t just mean the final end but the process that takes one to the end.
Also explain briefly how ethics is a requirement for human life.
Good conclusion.
Work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
Quote some of the personalities like Mahatma Gandhi.
You have justified properly that ethics doesn’t just mean the final end but the process that takes one to the end but need to work upon sentence formation as many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
You can write something about deontological ethics to get better marks.
Good conclusion.
Work on presentation of the answer.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Uttam
Good introduction.
Briefly explain how ethics is a requirement for human life.
If you are writing a quote, then put in columns, work on presentation and refrain from monotony to get better marks.
Good conclusion.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Give proper headings and subheadings.
A good attempt.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi PS
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Good introduction.
You have quote various personalities, that is appreciable , but there is a need of narrative of examples justifying that ethics doesn’t just mean the final end but the process that takes one to the end.
Evaluate some general situations like stealing food to feed a child or another instance can be a student should be ethical in facing examination like not cheating, sticking to the time limits etc. however, it should not be an end in itself.
Rest of the content is decent.
Good conclusion.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing , you will succeed.
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