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Given the complex nature of functions performed by the banks in comparison to other businesses subjecting them to stricter norms of governance is necessary. In light of this examine the adequacy of existing governance norms and suggest ways to improve them. 10 marks

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11 responses to “Given the complex nature of functions performed by the banks in comparison to other businesses subjecting them to stricter norms of governance is necessary. In light of this examine the adequacy of existing governance norms and suggest ways to improve them. 10 marks”

  1. Taran Avatar
    Taran

    Order #0000223024
    Please check my answer

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Taran
      Need to rephrase your introduction.
      Use heading and subheadings for better presentation.
      Like in this question,you can give headings like importance of banking system, current norms of banking system ,suggestions and conclusion.
      Also mention how to align the current regulatory framework on bank governance with global best practices, including the guidelines issued by the Basel Committee on Banking Supervision and the Financial Stability Board.
      Work on content.
      Underline keywords to get better marks.
      Keep writing!

  2. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
    Dakshina Moorthy

    Order no. #0000233081

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Dakshina
      Introduction could be better.
      Good use of flow chart !
      Mention what governance risks associated with recent lapses of banks.
      Add dimensions to your answer.
      Write points in your suggestions like the majority of a commercial bank’s board must comprise of independent directors.
      You can go through the newspaper article link , it will help you to improve your content.
      Conclusion is good.
      Keep writing!

  3. NJ_00 Avatar
    NJ_00

    MOJO0206200D40884686

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi
      Need to rephrase your introduction, grammatical errors are there.
      Use of flow chart is appreciable.
      Content is good and well placed.
      Structure of answer is good.
      Try to manage the space in a better way.
      You your answer is according to the demand of the question,keep it up !
      A decent attempt.
      Keep writing.

  4. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Payment ID: 0000230867

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Deepika
      Good introduction.
      Mention briefly the functions performed by banking system,you can use a flow chart for that.
      Mention about Basel norms, various committees regarding banking governance etc.
      You can also mention briefly why good banking governance is important for India.
      Try to cover more aspects.
      Work on content.
      Suggestions are good.
      Good conclusion.
      Keep writing.

  5. Vikrant Kumar Avatar
    Vikrant Kumar

    Plz review it

  6. Parakh Sarda Avatar
    Parakh Sarda

    Please Review OrderID – ~0000232028

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Hi Parakh
      Introduction is not according to the demand of the question.
      Add more functions of the bank in the same flow chart.
      Cover more verticals, add Basel norms,PCA ,bank’s ombudsman etc.
      Brainstorm before writing.
      Briefly explain why good banking governance is important for India.
      Way forward is good,keep it up !
      Work on basic grammar and improve handwriting to get good marks.
      You have the potential to write good answers,keep writing,you will succeed.

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