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Covid pandemic has highlighted a lot of structural issues in governance. Highlight them and suggest some solutions which can be adopted at various levels of governance.10 marks

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  • In the intro, you can mention that pandemic and disruption experienced in its wake has posed an unprecedented challenge to the governance.
  • In the body, you can highlight the issues related to various aspect of the governance such as health, economic, law and order which has been facing challenges. Then you can mention that these problems are at various levels national, state and local level. The success of Kerala government in containing the pandemic successfully has been attributed to state-local level coordination. You can cite this as an example. Then suggest the measure to be adopted to deal with these issues.
  • Conclude by stressing the need to root out these issues to tackle any crisis in the future successfully.

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20 responses to “Covid pandemic has highlighted a lot of structural issues in governance. Highlight them and suggest some solutions which can be adopted at various levels of governance.10 marks”

  1. Deepika Saini Avatar
    Deepika Saini

    Please review.

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Deepika introduction should be catchy,rewrite introduction
      there are so many grammatical mistakes in your answer,work on basic grammar
      good discussion in the main body
      avoid cutting of words in the answer sheet
      the content is rich and well placed
      overall good attempt,keep it up

  2. Teja Avatar
    Teja

    Payment I’d – 0000230227

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Teja you need to rephrase your introduction,there are grammatical errors.
      you have covered less aspects relating to challenges,need o diversify your answer
      improve spellings , and do not do basic mistakes like non-corporation
      conclusion is missing,do not end answer without concluding remarks
      adhere to proper structure of the answer
      underline keywords to convince examiner easily
      keep practicing ,you will improve

  3. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
    Dakshina Moorthy

    Please review the answer.

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      HI Dakshina
      Mention your payment id.
      lackluster introduction,mention briefly how pandemic situation has posed an unprecedented challenge to the governance.
      Good use of flow chart.
      Avoid using capital alphabets in between of a sentence (except for nouns).
      Well structured answer.
      In conclusion,also mention why there is a need for these governance reforms.
      Persistency is the key to success,keep writing

    2. Dakshina Moorthy Avatar
      Dakshina Moorthy

      Parth sir, order no. is #0000233081. Please check other answers also.

  4. aastha gupta Avatar
    aastha gupta

    ID #191476

  5. aastha gupta Avatar
    aastha gupta

    please review ID #191476.

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      HI Aastha
      Your intro lacks the necessary depth.there is also a need to rephrase it.
      Mention briefly how the pandemic situation posed different challenges for governance.
      You have discussed the body in a good manner,keep it up .
      Conclusion is missing,
      Conclude by stressing the need and ways to tackle any crisis in the future successfully.
      Work on basic grammar
      Keep writing,you will improve.

    2. aastha gupta Avatar
      aastha gupta

      Sir, marks?

    3. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Marks-4

  6. Parakh Sarda Avatar
    Parakh Sarda

    I have paid for the course but not getting option to attach file. Can anyone guide me?

    1. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Parakh you can attach your file with the help of attachment link given in the right side of the comment box.

    2. Parakh Sarda Avatar
      Parakh Sarda

      Hi Parth. I am not getting attachment option besides comment box.
      Mailed the screenshot to hello@civilsdaily.com.
      Is it an issue of browser?

    3. Parth Verma Avatar
      Parth Verma

      Parakh you can change the browser and see if it is working or not.

    4. Parakh Sarda Avatar
      Parakh Sarda

      No its not working in explorer also. I saw in AWE’s comment section, seems like people have faced this issue earlier also

  7. NJ_00 Avatar
    NJ_00

    MOJO0206200D40884686

    1. NJ_00 Avatar
      NJ_00

      @parth-verma1: Sir please review

  8. Vishesh Chaurasia Avatar
    Vishesh Chaurasia

    Payment id – pay_F2OP9B0wWwAWj4

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