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Hi Deepika
Good introduction
You have mentioned the contribution part in a good manner.
You did not mention the Marakkars’ fight against Portugese.
Lackluster conclusion,write something like this – the saga of Kunjali Marakkar teaches one vital lesson of history and that is the freedom of the sea which finally maintains the freedom of the land also.
Work on content,read comprehensively to enrich it.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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.Hi Dakshina
Good introduction.
You are good at using diagrams,keep it up !
Well structured answer.
Content is diversified and well placed.
You have the potential of writing good answers,you can join our Mains guidance program for comprehensive enrichment of your answers.
Overall a good attempt,keep writing!
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Hi Amith
Good introduction.
Diagram and presentation by flow chart is also good.
You have discussed the answer in a decent manner.
But need to diversify your content.
Write about guirella warfare.
Always try to end your answer with concluding remarks.
For example,in this answer you can conclude like this- the saga of Kunjali Marakkar teaches one vital lesson of history and that is the freedom of the sea which finally maintains the freedom of the land also.
Keep writing,you will improve.
Thank you sir. Will definitely work on it.
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