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Budget 2019 seems to be a budget for the masses as the government has announced several relief measures for farmers, informal workers and other marginalized communities. Critically analyze. (200 W)

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Pritam Kumar

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https://www.civilsdaily.com/news/op-ed-snap-socio-economic-issues-focus-area-of-budget-2019/

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2 responses to “Budget 2019 seems to be a budget for the masses as the government has announced several relief measures for farmers, informal workers and other marginalized communities. Critically analyze. (200 W)”

  1. Divya Avatar
    Divya

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    1. Pritam Kumar Avatar
      Pritam Kumar

      Hi Divya,
      -Nice introductory line…but avoid saying ‘I would like to quote’…quote should directly be mentioned…
      -Points mentioned are good and arranged…
      -However, conclusion could have been better…here we need to praise the initiatives with their utilitarian principles…The rest is good..

      Overall, nice attempt…well written answer…
      Keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 7.5/12.5