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23rd January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

Critically examine the causes responsible for the phenomenon called ‘de-industrialization’ in India during the nineteenth century. (150 W)

Question 2)

Discuss with suitable examples, the emerging challenges faced by the Regulatory Commissions as to the arbitrary agents between the state and the market forces. (150 W)

Question 3)

The term ‘Green Finance’ has gained a lot of attention in the past few years with the increased focus on greed development. Why the green finance is an ambiguous term and what are the issues in mobilization and effective use of green finance? Is it a sufficient step towards the sustainable development? (200 W)

Question 4)

Why ‘integrity’ in civil services is essential? How a team is benefitted when leader is of unimpeachable integrity? Justify your argument with example. (150 W)

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9 responses to “23rd January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement”

  1. Invincible Avatar
    Invincible

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    Invincible

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  3. Satyam Akotiya Avatar
    Satyam Akotiya

    Ans.1
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    1. Bob Avatar
      Bob

      Hi, satyam
      – Introduction needs some improvement.
      – The points/causes as mention in answer are sound, however some points/causes should be added, specially with regarding to the socially problems of that times Indian society.
      – The conclusion seems to be good.
      The overall answer is good but needed further improvement specially in area of introduction and points/causes. …. The structure of answer and writing seems to be best, so marks awarded 5.5 out of 10.

  4. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST 22580
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    1. Bob Avatar
      Bob

      Hi GK
      – Introduction is seems sound, but need to further improvement.
      – The entire answer’s main body is limited the discussing only regarding to the functions of regulatory commissions, but answer does not mention any about emerging challenges of its. Hence, the answer should be address the challenges of regulatory commissions as according to question.
      – The answer give the examples like RBI, but answer did not give more attention on RBI’s challenges as a arbitrary agents between the state and the market forces.
      – Conclusion is also good, but need to systematic arrange it.
      – The overall structure of answer is not good, because the entire answer seem a single paragraph. Therefore, the answer should have been clearly separated from each other between introduction, main body and conclusion.
      – The answer formation should have been point wise, which are the lack in this answer …. So marks awarded 4.5 out of 10.

  5. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST 22580
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  6. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST 22580
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    1. Pritam Kumar Avatar
      Pritam Kumar

      Hi GK,
      Points of answer seems to be good…
      However, the structure needs some improvement…the answer needs to be separated in paragraphs…we can not write entire answer in one para. similar ideas should be mentioned together in one para only and the other ideas should follow the next para…
      -The ideas mentioned are good but lack in example…
      Overall, nice approach…need to work on structure…content wise need to incorporate some examples…the rest is good…
      Well written…keep writing…
      The points of conclusion could have been much better…though it seems okay…
      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

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