Civilsdaily

9th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

Written by

Root

in

Students are advised to post answers in the comment section of this post below. Kindly ensure that answer to each question is posted as a separate comment with the purchase ID provided by us.

Reviews will be provided in a week. (In the order of submission- First come first serve basis)

*In case your answer is not reviewed in a week, reply to your answer saying *NOT CHECKED*. If Pritam Sir’s tag is available then tag him.  

For the philosophy of AWE and payment, check  here: Click2Join

Question 1)

Bhagat Singh was considered as one of the most influential revolutionary of Modern India. Through light on the significance of the thoughts of Bhagat Singh in the present times. (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 2)

Bangladesh has been India’s most important allies strategically as well as economically. Highlight India’s interest in Bangladesh and analyze what does economic transformation of Bangladesh mean for the Subcontinent as a whole. (250 W/ 15 M)

Question 3)

If implemented Social Media communication hub will transform India into a Surveillance state? Critically comment. (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 4)

‘Courage and perseverance have a magical talisman, before which difficulties disappear and obstacles vanish into air’. – ‘John Adams’ (10 marks 150 words)

 

Comments

33 responses to “9th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement”

  1. ANUBHAW MISHRA Avatar
    ANUBHAW MISHRA

    CDTEST 23406 ANS 3 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/88284ba815186c9c7b890f45fa6383647fbc7a227447deb63c4be4471a289177.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/80bbf2bd03b4626158bd9dd39c7e0524188af03246d79358e7d7b1057203e2d3.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi ANUBHAW MISHRA
      your answer seems to be okay..
      you need to shorten intro max 3-4 lines, so that you can do justice to demand of question…
      emphasize upon social communication hub clearly rather generalised points
      elaborate upon why such steps is needed…
      last para is placed haphazardly…
      lastly conclusion is missing..
      refer to model answer.

  2. ANUBHAW MISHRA Avatar
    ANUBHAW MISHRA

    CDTEST 23406 ANS2 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/d2e93a841a4051745da71816624951cb7df1547624ba413b0443a960e5d6ffa3.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/ba6c9c9c89eb4d63a148c620ada688e4f6c0752199c58550996925022f85018a.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi ANUBHAW MISHRA
      intro is good.
      1st part of body missed main points like connectivity, security aspects…
      2nd part of question has not been answered…what economic transformation of Bangladesh mean for the Subcontinent as a whole.
      conclusion is fine..

      keep writing
      refer to model answer

  3. lekha_27 Avatar
    lekha_27

    CDTEST22496 Ans 3 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/d36ad8c4ca625d7d9f085d41578d1d1cf49238f4464339479d4d9c63204e9f3d.jpg
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/cf0257a4f3ebbe5e9abc089a8fcf56f14d18a3e3376db139f4933b0b6b4041cc.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi lekha_27,
      well written answer…
      just ellaborate upon Social Media Communication hub in intro…
      2nd use words like data privacy, examples need to be quoted especially recent incident of facebook
      3rd mention justice BN krishna committe points,
      4th give example of The General Data Protection Regulation (EU)
      shorten your conclusion to accommodate above points

      refer model answer…

  4. lekha_27 Avatar
    lekha_27

    CDTEST22496 Ans 2
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/b1dc800d693af96bb96727ef13b8f5e856614af538f5a28af334d225aed2a408.jpg
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/5d5e1a6b6b1570713e4bfe90e92ce8c69e2e3ec818e41b390fc181305ffde6a1.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi lekha_27,
      well articulated answer…
      just add examples as they are missing in many points…
      2ndly, elaborate on point 3 ie regional and global…
      3rdly, private investment aspect missing…

      shorten you conclusion max 4-5 lines…

      refer model answer

  5. lekha_27 Avatar
    lekha_27

    CDTEST22496 Ans 1
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/294a95f247885cc79ccabbf12e7ab4f9d75df20e55f2689233056fdcb9a97b34.jpg
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/8e0d6fd45fb3722d55916e13a6b1e22cb848389475051d53bf34f95fe093946b.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi lekha_27,
      nice answer…
      improvement-
      point 1- you can add articles of part 3/4, various facts related to inequality. this add weight to it.
      point 2- here also you can add articles of part 3/4, give example of growing tendency of surveillance state etc
      point 3 give examples of recent happenings
      point 4 give examples

      keep writing

  6. harsimran kaur Avatar
    harsimran kaur

    CDTEST22672
    Ans 1 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/1cef6f1727b6bd761781fd2bfc790072ab17496bea8e9a030629f2deb04a243c.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/98734a71a41f5182a5e874089604e2d7e86d0a7aadd635dbfd4d762fd2e91995.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/fb4a9498a08bba0f51ed0230fe2e8229dc4df8ccce63293d9175e4aaa0c61ba2.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi harsimran kaur,
      well understanding of question written with contemporary examples…
      but, points seems to repetitive..please take care of that..
      rather club 2 parts of body and explain there only..
      don’t write such long conclusion rather add few more aspects in body..

    2. harsimran kaur Avatar
      harsimran kaur

      And am not getting compilations,where is it uploaded on site?

    3. harsimran kaur Avatar
      harsimran kaur

      Will take care of it
      Are you Aspirant or from
      civils daily team?

  7. Stevie G Avatar
    Stevie G

    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/c06396f5a09616e45e4a5e222516cbd1bf369c325c06bad4670d8ee799c4ee3b.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/db674ff1758a388c1904a9d81988eab43c199c8670ee9b0aedd391ae1f6340cb.jpg

    Answer 2 . Id: CDTEST22553

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi Stevie G ,
      No need of historical aspect in intro…just give 2-3 line intro
      body-
      poor structure, haphazard presentation
      missed major points..

      2nd part of your body is totally out of context to the demand of question. read carefully to meet the demand of question

      refer to model answer

  8. dhritiman das Avatar
    dhritiman das

    Ans3. https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/df3c8b716a1cca5beb3bcbed0df7ea13d1a3c10560e0fd01cc566f335f2696f4.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/2a97c8b032ee5ca319066323da4cfd8be3ef70ff66b2e9961a30c7694cc85231.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi @disqus_TIr2Jn1kED:disqus
      it seems you have not read previous suggestion…
      you are still continuing with your rough answer writing and poor handwriting…

      please work on it asap

    2. dhritiman das Avatar
      dhritiman das

      These are answers uploaded before suggestion.i am removing the next answers

  9. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST22580
    Ans 4 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/bbba6d36c2eb6fc25619a6966a1ad6c047ab501974cfa7ac5a4c93adf9069315.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/b2c3a374255d806ec0663ecfca8a68a6a95b43ff6632aff82e4a4db106918707.jpg

  10. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST22580
    Ans 2 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/0f8b05096ec62dd70768b55c12df89bded3296bd9231b0c76afbdff573935b9e.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/2bda218dee222c83bd9f8abfc69b6d3acf1f4ed5765387ada42be735751388a3.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/b2c2ba33ad3070080f80c21f266c170eb26759e8f6d72500268681896d567deb.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi gk
      intro seems to be okay..
      body-
      1st part need improvement in few points…
      2nd part of question is not answered well rather repetition of points which can be clubbed in 1-2 points
      don’t write long conclusion to fill pages it will not fetch you mark rather add more aspects in body…

      refer model answer

  11. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST22580
    Ans 3 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/645b82df357fe3770c57b924f181ec489ecaed92ac443e609b56af49c04742df.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/ea44cbbbf0512dee073a17cbb1b91e86429def650bce0b99e72ce06a411e3251.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi gk
      intro is okay..elaborate upon social media comm. hub.
      body
      points seems to be repetitive..
      missed main points to add weight to answer

      just 2 points to cons..add few more points
      poor conclusion..

      refer to model answer..

  12. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST22580
    Ans 1 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/c47ca55a33cde9d7a884bfbc872413e208bd456e0664dd61205e22c1e48d24d3.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/1f48ec34fda4d4600fcdb0012e52e0fa577f33cc27d59fba38873b82c4a1dc91.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi gk
      it seems you have totally digressed from demand of question…
      you need to elaborate upon his ideologies and how it is relevant today…

      refer model answer

  13. Satyam Akotiya Avatar
    Satyam Akotiya

    CDTEST22917Q.4
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/61cbebdea75cdd0b1a10477a15d0fa9fd161c4eda0302d58325c5d8317c114fd.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/398832d9a1d101e7fea42fb574ce607984f17c3d223a163666b823d1e163fbe0.jpg

  14. Satyam Akotiya Avatar
    Satyam Akotiya

    CDTEST22917
    Q.3 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/15d9cfe9256de6438448e510f18d99bee0095dbae5bcfa148b6dbe9962a4e141.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/a0fba5bbf41a611f256ca973247c20d731bcdbc7ab5a88a706036e17b9fc8253.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi Satyam Akotiya
      your intro is poor…
      2ndly please elaborate upon social media communication hub..
      3rdly pros part can be clubbed in just 2 points..don’t repeat by changing words..
      cons part example missing
      not good conclusion…need improvement again repetition

      refer model answer.

  15. n b Avatar
    n b

    CDTEST22416 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/5165579b5f4f5ca55e7ac277677759d43d4cead2a31101e80ad46f115ac82a58.jpg
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/3fd0e2106521117cf2e7ef49df7a96deb47b8f3a0c551fbf20da8f4878b1c88b.jpg ANS 3.

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi n b,
      intro seems to be okay..please elaborate on social media communication hub..
      body..
      few points seems to be incomplete…

      others aspects are fine
      refer to model answer

  16. Manish yadav Avatar
    Manish yadav

    Question 2 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/84bb823c37226b6d81e5a3eefbb09e69f3e1de44919349e9232df4edc4107e5e.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/0cecf761c36fa715fe75b640e69e1774efae36c7ed71de6338023aa62e2d7f08.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi Manish yadav
      don’t experiment with your answer writing…despite good points you will not get good marks because of poor presentation…
      2ndly you have missed 2nd part of question..
      rather written which is not demand of question..

      refer model answer

Leave a Reply

More posts