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8th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

By offering an ideological critique of the western civilization in its modern phase, Gandhiji was effectively contesting the moral legitimacy of the Raj that rested on a stated assumption of the superiority of the west. Comment (10 marks)

Question 2)

The recent year has witnessed increased anti-India protest in the Valley of Jammu and Kashmir with rising insurgency and intense counter insurgency operations causing acute distress. Discuss the region behind such prolonged situation and suggest suitable strategy to tackle the problem. (12 ½ M)

Question 3)

What are the main functions of the EBRD? Recently India has become member of EBRD, what benefits will India derive from its membership? (10 M)

Question 4)

With the decrement of ethics and moral values and increasing demand for standards such as accountability and responsibility in public services, what are the ethical concerns and dilemmas that may arise for a public servant? How can a public servant prepare himself to face these ethical challenges so as to perform his duties efficiently? ( 10 marks 150 words)

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43 responses to “8th January 2019 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement”

  1. Kapiushon Avatar
    Kapiushon

    CDTEST20663
    Answer 1
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    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi Kapiushon
      your introduction is very poor confusing and repetition of words.
      In Body-
      add few more points and heavy weight words…
      In way forward, you need to mention schemes like himayat, roshini etc.
      best practices by NGO’s, state govt. to add weight to answer.
      otherwise your answer seems to be superficial.
      conclusion is also poor
      lastly u need to work upon your handwriting, spelling asap.
      refer to model answer..
      keep writing.

  2. Kapiushon Avatar
    Kapiushon

    CDTEST20663
    Answer 1 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/9b50ac355e0cbdac639133cd18b17a46751a7892abb78fbd73e9a844b92c40cf.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/3bb530d17a493f0959c1070286e8e1a6a9020a18c2a474efc3d4a79e7e8d1e91.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi Kapiushon
      you need to work upon introduction.
      secondly, you have explained just 3 points..rather shorten your points to add few more points like swaraj, swadeshi, rural deindustrialization etc..
      separate it in 2 parts like british ideology and 2nd part as gandhi critique…
      refer to model answer to see more points
      keep writing

  3. lekha_27 Avatar
    lekha_27

    CDTEST22496 Ans 3
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/3e39123c2a68e3a948eea9de3ea5a31980869d4270053a2ab668339be5fd3fd7.jpg
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/d7371fc79659e857b0c49bf2b1cab2dee306c7040e1138f02f56c0b70dc67eed.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi lekha_27
      it seems you have missed the functions of EBRD or had tried to club it with intro..
      please refer to model answer for functions of EBRD.
      benefits points needs to be improved…you have missed major benefits of EBRD for india…
      please refer to model answer
      or
      https://cfo.economictimes.indiatimes.com/news/so-why-does-india-want-membership-of-the-ebrd/61768699

  4. lekha_27 Avatar
    lekha_27

    CDTEST22496 Ans 1
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/df43bb596d57c318b941156f6499e010e7907e788b12ee2e891ac5bbbf992172.jpg
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/64a14bd6dfee0fa0e50eb82a3e58e81b58485e3c6c2bd6252f296ff75e33a7a3.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi lekha_27
      your answer good.
      what you need to shorten your 1st para, so that you can add upon other aspects of western ideology..and other aspects of Gandhian ideology and how it countered western ideology
      keep writing..
      refer to model answer

  5. lekha_27 Avatar
    lekha_27

    CDTEST22496 Ans 2
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/db2252484aa68d862cab5ab3fe821578f06c22fbccf2a7ff3c13bd2ddfbd8e28.jpg
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/2f2ae7fb1f4ac5e8a69fd9120c70dbaa519c25c1c04eb3579b50c2355fc32dc5.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi lekha_27
      your answer seems to be superficial..
      1st shorten your introduction, which will give you space to write more in body
      2nd you need to give example/facts to support your points.
      you have missed points like political instability, glorification of terrorists, changing pattern of J&K clash…
      3rd mention govt schemes, armed forces initiatives
      refer model answer
      keep writing…

  6. Stevie G Avatar
    Stevie G

    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/df21168954added8dd927bef339023d6c20c3e5beef47f8030338ea79d7efe20.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/4d6c9cce48cc1d24c87e7c8eb499c3e84418fb0333436024d1835a10cb849377.jpg

    Answer 3 . ID: CDTEST22553

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi Stevie G
      please shorten your intro so that incorporate more points in body.
      otherwise your answer is good, to the point.
      keep writing
      refer to model answer

  7. Stevie G Avatar
    Stevie G

    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/465efda2a2e8d68e67041ab5eb08f7fff82738475ddefab34f1caa313820afe2.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/8b8bbf74901144b329d1c8c8947bab077aea630d4eebff51e80ceb3bbccb2fd3.jpg

    Answer 2 . ID: CDTEST22553

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi Stevie G
      your intro has no correlation with question. please don’t experiment with your answer writing…
      2nd your body seems to be repetitive and haphazard…you need to short and to the point backed with examples.
      3rd way forward should mention govt schemes..
      you have mentioned intitiatives by armed forces..good point
      conclusion missing

      keep writing
      refer to model answer

  8. The Last Crusader Avatar
    The Last Crusader

    Answer to Q3: EBRD https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/6a2a0560aef087a2ba104f0526b5ca7892703f0e41604c4e704bdcdd939beac5.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/8bd5d392ed656ee3285da0acf3a2f7f57ce48fdabd2e359cbdc95daf8f275c8e.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      HI The Last Crusader
      PLEASE DON’T WRITE STORY INTRO..IT WILL KILL YOUR SPACE FOR BODY…
      Functions part need to be backed by examples and clear (not generalised points)
      conclusion part is not upto the mark and not clear, repetition of words..
      keep writing
      refer to model answer or
      https://cfo.economictimes.indiatimes.com/news/so-why-does-india-want-membership-of-the-ebrd/61768699

    2. gk Avatar
      gk

      Hi The Last Crusader.
      I’m not that good at reviewing answers. Nice presentation and a well written answer.

    3. The Last Crusader Avatar
      The Last Crusader

      Same here,:)

      I think we all in dire need to improve on this front (reviewing our own answers) as well.

    4. The Last Crusader Avatar
      The Last Crusader

      Self Review:
      Repetition of words(e.g promote) in answer.
      Conclusion is not well formulated.
      Need to provide more clear info, not to generalize statements

  9. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST22580
    Ans 4 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/14fce27e73b176cc73cb5714d8fdcf7ea414320ecaa0b6b384c573cd1758f9e0.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/c8e27eafd7990df76c0636f3479334c908e414904bd6001229c17b1b35a0480f.jpg

  10. dark_horse16 Avatar
    dark_horse16

    CDTEST22756
    Ans 2 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/4de7fcfaf7e4c8da1de7447b332ebae7e7c5602dfc17942f51fdac19746ebed0.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/83dd76a264ed8a1449c3f4b71de653be1fcbe1f570e0bd40e439fd9a16b50a0d.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/2fc412aee8d69ba5d241ad8539750280a5622ce1fc7ebaeae3a31d849b874588.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi dark_horse16
      overall your answer is fine with good examples in way forward..
      what is needed is to add some examples to support your answer otherwise it will be superficial..
      2nd also mention govt initiatives in way forward..
      3rd conclusion is poor.. need improvement..

      keep writing
      refer model answer.

  11. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST22580
    Ans 3 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/e98cb0db2c2f8aa579ce1e85024c7c20848faaab84c851389c647f7034169712.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/186341acc6defcc4c249e1f928100af308f742b6c7a30644c62185d8f652ca3b.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      Hi GK,
      very well articulated answer..keep it up..
      just cut out 2-3 lines in intro ie historical aspect not needed…

      keep writing

    2. The Last Crusader Avatar
      The Last Crusader

      Hi GK,

      The overall presentation is good. You have mentioned functions and benefits in good pointed manner.
      If i have interpreted right from your answer, it might be a content error in context of benefits to India. EBRD has focused its area in central-eastern Europe and central Asia only. It may not invest in Indian private sector.

      If its ok with you,Please review mine.

  12. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST22580
    Ans 2 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/576ca187004f14135ffc83a28e586e66c93c52556bc7eb413b5c1f8f45fea0f3.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/182fbf86cb9c11bf26c1ed809a6dd7ed8ca7f1b177032ca934b8367a7b0b3fbe.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      Hi GK,
      your intro is fine, but your body part is poor..need improvement asap
      you need to support your points with examples/facts otherwise it seems superficial..

      In way forward
      1st point (OPERATION ALL OUT) is not the solution..
      2nd your points are below average.. ie generalised points will not fetch you marks
      mention govt schemes, initiatives of armed forces etc.

      refer to model answer
      keep writing

  13. gk Avatar
    gk

    CDTEST22580
    Ans 1 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/62a81980910ff036f84ada3a3109757a251b321b158314ada20ed6380344b3dc.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/1a9b8351dd299bf725188c3be88e5f7ff7bc031098b470545f058abe6c75acb0.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      Hi GK,
      intro is missing.
      body-
      british ideology part is good
      gandhi critique is good.. add examples to it and few other points.

      keep writing
      refer to model answer.

  14. Viney Kumar Avatar
    Viney Kumar

    Ans 1 CDTEST22513
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/5642864fd019639a344ba6dbfeb6c9ab11ce566402acd29446d4add050bc3795.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/eda177897fe390f695420446a23835ccd0cc8b0a4ff29a6ff13e579bf3b840a8.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi Viney Kumar
      your answer seems to be essay/story type…with minimum points related to the questions..
      you need to work on answer writing asap…
      refer to model answer

  15. Roopak Sharma Avatar
    Roopak Sharma

    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mY6jXgftbpDfjqA6TYE5WS3WsZI5xz2z/view?usp=drivesdk

  16. Manish yadav Avatar
    Manish yadav

    answer 1 https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/18c737a726b26a52de4a9308fa3e5ddc30bd3a5b3ef096a26f2f65e9ffd23dc6.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi Manish yadav
      the answer you have uploaded seems to be incomplete…
      please ensure from next time that you have uploaded full answer

      https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/18c737a726b26a52de4a9308fa3e5ddc30bd3a5b3ef096a26f2f65e9ffd23dc6.jpg

    2. Manish yadav Avatar
      Manish yadav

      Thanks for the review

  17. Manish yadav Avatar
    Manish yadav

    answer 2
    https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/6d262ada15a6b8b8282deae236631aa698ae5f027fda56a9f680baa9de34674b.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/f0e2212e626a0b024b2f6b4a852c3d1a7a51ffb0ae7079d1805674839395eeb0.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi Manish yadav
      please upload answer in proper way..
      intro is good.
      body-
      reasons-
      main points has been missed, few points can be clubbed in one (ex point and 2 ), add examples without it will be superficial.
      way forward-
      shorten your points so that you can accommodate more points…
      add govt schemes.

      last para of your ans should be conclusion with optimism.

      refer model answer.

    2. Manish yadav Avatar
      Manish yadav

      Thank you of your reviews , I will try to mend my mistakes nd not to create in next answer

  18. dhritiman das Avatar
    dhritiman das

    Ans2. https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/048f3de88ca99a0f89cf3c7710b213beccdbdebd86d710d8537e0d35a27a7253.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/6d09e886e5e92d6ed972fa0318fff27bae29123b0a78158a76a31621fd16f826.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi dhritiman@iim dropout,
      you need to improve your handwriting and answer writing style asap..
      it seems to be rough work…with so many vertical-horizontal line…

      lastly your answer is below average with poor content

      refer model answer.

  19. dhritiman das Avatar
    dhritiman das

    Ans1. https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/d501f8cdfb1d6e507d42e11c6a979f12634027f0b1dcd2dd07457f59085f6fea.jpg https://uploads.disquscdn.com/images/d9108323a2cb0c929246e8c60be17391e38d4fd462c900896f671a1c4a4dd5e3.jpg

    1. trojan123 Avatar
      trojan123

      hi dhritiman@disqus_TIr2Jn1kED:disqus
      you need to improve your handwriting and answer writing style asap..
      it seems to be rough work…with so many vertical-horizontal line…

      intro missing, which western ideology he opposed needs to be mentioned…
      overall poor content,presentation, haphazard writing style

      refer model answer.

    2. dhritiman das Avatar
      dhritiman das

      Thnk u ..latley i have changed

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