10th December 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement

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Question 1)

“The British Conquest of India was an outcome of neither a pre-planned strategy nor harmonious actions on the part of the British.” Elucidate. (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 2)

The Electoral Bond is meant to bring transparency in political funding and electoral processes. However, prima facie it appears that the scheme cannot really deliver what it was intended to. Identify the lacuna in Electoral Bond Scheme and suggest suitable measures. (200 W/ 12½ M)

Question 3)

Many economists are suggesting that RBI should intervene to stop free fall of Rupees. Discuss the pros and cons of RBI intervention? (150 W/ 10 M)

Question 4)

Examine the relationship between laws and ethics? Are they ever in contradiction? Are laws enough to promote ethical behaviour? Explain with examples. (250 W/ 15 M)

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41 responses to “10th December 2018 | Daily Answer Writing Enhancement”

    1. Pritam Kumar Avatar

      Hello Imgroot,
      -Very impressive introduction…
      -2nd points seems irrelevant…Bring justification with clarity here…why and how?
      -There are other issues which can be even more relevant in the context of the question…like no limit of buying bonds by an individual, this will have issue on RBIs autonomy, Not enough secrecy as the incumbent government can easily find out the donors details using KYC and can work as a harassing tool, No disclosure to Election Commission etc…etc…
      -The concluding point seems good and well written…
      Overall, good attempt…structure wise the answer is good…need to bring more relevant content…though good…keep it up…keep writing…
      Marks awarded: 6.5/12.5

    1. Pritam Kumar Avatar

      Hi Imgroot,
      -Good introduction…
      -1st page…pros of both the points are good…however, the cons need justification…as these seems only end result without any means…elaborate with clarity…
      -point 3 when inflation is acceptable level it means the liquidity in market is less…then how the cons can describe that the banks will be flooded with liquid money…this seems contradicting…
      -Point 4 is okay…though more clarity can be brought…
      -Points of conclusion seems okay…

      -Overall, your attempt is good…it would be better if we write all the pros together and similarly cons together…and at last suggesting the best way forward…and conclusion as well…

      Though good…need more micro focus on question…keep writing…will improve for sure…

      Marks awarded: 4.5/10

      Refer our model answer for better clarity…

    1. Shubham Sharma Avatar
      Shubham Sharma

      It was a nice attempt but I felt like you were going little off topic and you should give more reasons for the favour of the statement ,but I’m no expert here. Good luck .

    1. gk Avatar
      gk

      Sir, Please review the answer @ Pritam Kumar

    1. Kapiushon Avatar
      Kapiushon

      pritam sir, please review.
      Will the questions of december be checked before those of january??

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